Rhythmical Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Rain Left Me"2025 NaPoWriMo contest
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Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed the images throughout your beautiful poem. How rain changes from the harsh stormy rain to the gentle showers that bring beauty to the garden and rainbows to brighten our lives.
Nancy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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I enjoyed the images throughout your beautiful poem. How rain changes from the harsh stormy rain to the gentle showers that bring beauty to the garden and rainbows to brighten our lives.
Nancy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Nancy thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A lovely reminder that there will always be rainy days in life, both literally and figuratively. But life is change and there are better days coming if we can just remember that and wait. Beautifully written. A nice addition for your book.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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A lovely reminder that there will always be rainy days in life, both literally and figuratively. But life is change and there are better days coming if we can just remember that and wait. Beautifully written. A nice addition for your book.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Marilyn thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from June Sargent
It's been very rainy here in New England. But the garden will benefit from these showers. Your poem is as refreshing as spring rain, as it reminds us of the rainbows that will follow. Life balances our in the end.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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It's been very rainy here in New England. But the garden will benefit from these showers. Your poem is as refreshing as spring rain, as it reminds us of the rainbows that will follow. Life balances our in the end.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi June I live in New England too. thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from estory
April showers bring May flowers, right? This poem is a celebration of those gifts of rain, that we sometimes don't quite appreciate. Everyone loves those sunny days, the brightness and the tint. But without rain, there are no flowers. estory
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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April showers bring May flowers, right? This poem is a celebration of those gifts of rain, that we sometimes don't quite appreciate. Everyone loves those sunny days, the brightness and the tint. But without rain, there are no flowers. estory
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi estory thanks for comments and review Dove
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi this is quite good piece of writing. I like it. Well of course, it has got it own different mood on different day of the Spring. But that natural.,sometimes cold, sometimes cool and wet , lack of su.
And musty.
But they are all wrapped up...one parcel.
Enjoy them
Benny
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Hi this is quite good piece of writing. I like it. Well of course, it has got it own different mood on different day of the Spring. But that natural.,sometimes cold, sometimes cool and wet , lack of su.
And musty.
But they are all wrapped up...one parcel.
Enjoy them
Benny
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Benny thanks for your comments and review Dove
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Donna,
I always love the promise of the rainbow after unpleasant rains.
I like the way you contrast past, present, and future in this piece.
Kim
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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Hi Donna,
I always love the promise of the rainbow after unpleasant rains.
I like the way you contrast past, present, and future in this piece.
Kim
Comment Written 11-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2025
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hi Kim thanks for comments and review Donna
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has such a lovely flow! I really enjoy how you share the different moods of rain throughout the days. The hopeful tone in the last stanza adds a nice feeling of optimism. I felt like I was watching the rain with you!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Your poem has such a lovely flow! I really enjoy how you share the different moods of rain throughout the days. The hopeful tone in the last stanza adds a nice feeling of optimism. I felt like I was watching the rain with you!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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Michael thanks for your comments and review Donna
Comment from royowen
I love rain, we have had a drought ridden year, whereas the eastern states have had floods inundation, drowning livestock, even the outback has isolated settlements, another beautifully written poem, beautifully written poem Donna, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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I love rain, we have had a drought ridden year, whereas the eastern states have had floods inundation, drowning livestock, even the outback has isolated settlements, another beautifully written poem, beautifully written poem Donna, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2025
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hi Roy I take it you live in the South or West. Thanks for comments and review Bless you! Donna
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The south
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very lovely and well written poem about the extremely rainy spring thus far. Great imagery you have used also. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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Donna, This is a very lovely and well written poem about the extremely rainy spring thus far. Great imagery you have used also. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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hi Teri thanks for comments and review love and blessings Dove
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You are so welcome dear friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is what it is like in England every spring, we are used to the rain and I hope you enjoy the rainbows and the sun shines for your soon! I enjoyed your magical poem, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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This is what it is like in England every spring, we are used to the rain and I hope you enjoy the rainbows and the sun shines for your soon! I enjoyed your magical poem, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2025
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hi Dolly thanks for comments and review love Donna x
