Scene at a Cast Meeting
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
I laughed reading this; "iffy: It's actually a fishing licence. but I am often shooting fish that are too aggressive.
Matt: You keep that weapon; I'll just point my finger.
Bill: While we're young, Matt. Okay -- action!
Fox : Aseninto!?
Felix : D-d-doble Ass-ass -eninto!?" This was an amazing scene. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I laughed reading this; "iffy: It's actually a fishing licence. but I am often shooting fish that are too aggressive.
Matt: You keep that weapon; I'll just point my finger.
Bill: While we're young, Matt. Okay -- action!
Fox : Aseninto!?
Felix : D-d-doble Ass-ass -eninto!?" This was an amazing scene. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you, Iza
Comment from nomi338
So, did Ned sock someone in their snot locker? Hot damn, old Ned is not to be messed with. He may not be the sharpest knife in the drawer, but apparently, he packs a mean punch.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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So, did Ned sock someone in their snot locker? Hot damn, old Ned is not to be messed with. He may not be the sharpest knife in the drawer, but apparently, he packs a mean punch.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Don’t pull the mask off an old Lone Ranger and don’t mess around with Ned.
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Gotcha, Ned is my guy.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh sure, Bill, I have all your characters written down so I can get used to them better and what do you do, you change their descriptions.
But I suppose you would do that because after all, these are action packed scenes you are doing and they seem to have everyone pretty much doing their part, except for a few who are so darn funny.
I love the arguing back and forth, the little interruptions. The glasses that are really a camera and the fishing license for shooting fish.
What I would give to be in that room, Bill. Hahaha.
I love these so much I feel like copying them down. I don't maybe catch it all, but I love this kind of comedy.
Thank you for these wonderful action packed scenes that keep me in stitches. LOL. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Oh sure, Bill, I have all your characters written down so I can get used to them better and what do you do, you change their descriptions.
But I suppose you would do that because after all, these are action packed scenes you are doing and they seem to have everyone pretty much doing their part, except for a few who are so darn funny.
I love the arguing back and forth, the little interruptions. The glasses that are really a camera and the fishing license for shooting fish.
What I would give to be in that room, Bill. Hahaha.
I love these so much I feel like copying them down. I don't maybe catch it all, but I love this kind of comedy.
Thank you for these wonderful action packed scenes that keep me in stitches. LOL. Love, Debi
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I have fun with these characters.
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Shoot, I forgot to write at the end of my first sentence, an LOL... I was having some fun with you. Like I would ever be serious when having so much fun. Sorry about the misunderstanding, as I did mean it to be funny.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. Don't have a pair of trick camera glasses? Just say you do. It's a show anyway. Pretend and pretend. I'm not sure it's legal to shoot a fish. But who cares.
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Haha. Don't have a pair of trick camera glasses? Just say you do. It's a show anyway. Pretend and pretend. I'm not sure it's legal to shoot a fish. But who cares.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Lisa
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I hope those trick camera glasses work. I laughed at the fishing license which apparently doubles as a gun license!
I'm not sure what happened to Pallas but glad that Ned is untouched. Another funny episode.
Do you have a licence? (British Spelling but that's okay. Americans spell it license)
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Well, I hope those trick camera glasses work. I laughed at the fishing license which apparently doubles as a gun license!
I'm not sure what happened to Pallas but glad that Ned is untouched. Another funny episode.
Do you have a licence? (British Spelling but that's okay. Americans spell it license)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I spelled it wrong.
Comment from kahpot
Jiffy: It's actually a fishing licence. but I am often shooting fish that are too aggressive. love the image this line gives,
we here down under spell licence (license) another excellent read and wonderful lingo, do we find out about
Pallas next time, or did I miss something****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Jiffy: It's actually a fishing licence. but I am often shooting fish that are too aggressive. love the image this line gives,
we here down under spell licence (license) another excellent read and wonderful lingo, do we find out about
Pallas next time, or did I miss something****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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He is in a lump outside and his brother will drive him home. I will address that next time. Yes, we spell license the same way, most of the time.
Comment from jim vecchio
Those trick glasses got me into trouble with the cheerleaders on the college paper. ll that stuff bout the clones I find a bit confusing. Why don't Lois and Scr were ultraviolet clothing. Then they could be glowin' clones.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Those trick glasses got me into trouble with the cheerleaders on the college paper. ll that stuff bout the clones I find a bit confusing. Why don't Lois and Scr were ultraviolet clothing. Then they could be glowin' clones.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I will consider their wardrobe, Jim.
