No - Say It Ain't So!
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Comment from Faith Williams
Ha, ha, ha! So Trump ended up going off the deep end all by himself. Sort of. And wait, you're continuing the switcharoo? Can't wait to see where this one leads.
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I think you began this chapter in the present tense, but I think you wrote it in the past tense.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Ha, ha, ha! So Trump ended up going off the deep end all by himself. Sort of. And wait, you're continuing the switcharoo? Can't wait to see where this one leads.
Suggestions to consider:
I think you began this chapter in the present tense, but I think you wrote it in the past tense.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much. I sure check out the tenses! Thanks.
Comment from jim vecchio
I hope this isn't the end of your entertaining tle. I hate endings. Wish I had six. The Trump/Frodo part reminded me of the time I was on "To Tell The Truth". First I was me, and they highlighted my illustrious life to the panelists (Peggy Cass, Arlene Francis, Orson Bean and Ish Kabible). Then I morphed into Jim Vecchio #3, who was an aspiring Broadway performer. In my body, he suddenly went into a tap dance and sang "Don't Sit Under The Apple Tree With Anyone Else But Me". When we morphed back, I got a call to aspper on The Gong Show.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I hope this isn't the end of your entertaining tle. I hate endings. Wish I had six. The Trump/Frodo part reminded me of the time I was on "To Tell The Truth". First I was me, and they highlighted my illustrious life to the panelists (Peggy Cass, Arlene Francis, Orson Bean and Ish Kabible). Then I morphed into Jim Vecchio #3, who was an aspiring Broadway performer. In my body, he suddenly went into a tap dance and sang "Don't Sit Under The Apple Tree With Anyone Else But Me". When we morphed back, I got a call to aspper on The Gong Show.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I'll bet you aspperred very well, too!
Thank you for the 'six', and for your very kind review.
7 or 8 switching adventures will follow.
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. What a clever ending - and a hint of more stories about Phil and Tom to come! very clever wrap-up. So poor old Trump is now no longer president - this will be very disconcerting for him - but he may be too engrossed in book characters to worry to much. Well done, Wayne. This was very imaginative.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Lol. What a clever ending - and a hint of more stories about Phil and Tom to come! very clever wrap-up. So poor old Trump is now no longer president - this will be very disconcerting for him - but he may be too engrossed in book characters to worry to much. Well done, Wayne. This was very imaginative.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much.
As for imaginative, it was mostly wishful thinking.
Thank you for the six stars!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Great ending! I'm glad that Tom and Phil have become such fast friends. Hope they two of them figure out how to speak Spanish and Italian (and everything else the Pope speaks) really fast. It seems that the real Trump was already so out of it that he fell right into step with the dementia implied.
What's your name, dear? Angela." Should it be:
What's your name, dear?"
"Angela."
"You haven't backed off Alaska?" Phil asked. "Nope. (I wondered if the "Nope" was Tom talking?)
And I think the Hobbit's name is "Merrie" not "Merry" but it was decades ago when I read the book.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Lol. Great ending! I'm glad that Tom and Phil have become such fast friends. Hope they two of them figure out how to speak Spanish and Italian (and everything else the Pope speaks) really fast. It seems that the real Trump was already so out of it that he fell right into step with the dementia implied.
What's your name, dear? Angela." Should it be:
What's your name, dear?"
"Angela."
"You haven't backed off Alaska?" Phil asked. "Nope. (I wondered if the "Nope" was Tom talking?)
And I think the Hobbit's name is "Merrie" not "Merry" but it was decades ago when I read the book.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you!
For your encouragement and for your helps I appreciate it all
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Thank you for cheering us up! 💖
Comment from royowen
How intriguing that the redoubtable Phil Jansen is now running the country in Donald Trump's body and Donald Trump is now in Phil's body where he can't do too much damage, now how would it be to be the pope, beautifully written Wayne,blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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How intriguing that the redoubtable Phil Jansen is now running the country in Donald Trump's body and Donald Trump is now in Phil's body where he can't do too much damage, now how would it be to be the pope, beautifully written Wayne,blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you. But actually, Trump resigned with no V.P. and the Speaker of the House became Pres.
Presumably, Trump pranced his way to Mar-a-Lago, a private citizen.
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Ok Wayne thanks
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
So apparently Trump's mental instability took him over at the right time. Great job creating an amazingly amusing story. So, are we now going to discover how the Pope runs things?
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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So apparently Trump's mental instability took him over at the right time. Great job creating an amazingly amusing story. So, are we now going to discover how the Pope runs things?
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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smiley face here (the Pope)
Thank you for your support throughout the story.
And thank you immensely for the six stars!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed this chapter! Trump becoming Frodo Baggins and the Pope twist at the end is really fun. I also love the relationship between Tom and Phil - it feels genuine - like two friends who've been through a lot together. The humor keeps me hooked! Great job! I can't wait to see where you take this next.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I really enjoyed this chapter! Trump becoming Frodo Baggins and the Pope twist at the end is really fun. I also love the relationship between Tom and Phil - it feels genuine - like two friends who've been through a lot together. The humor keeps me hooked! Great job! I can't wait to see where you take this next.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you very, very much!
I hope I don't disappoint.
