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I Had to Tinkle, and Got A Medal

A Story About Army Life.

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Comment from Sally Law
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Harry,
Oh for heaven's sake! You are a lucky one and just doing what came naturally. It's great you saved your unit, something of eternal value. I went to the loo and while there, won an award. Someone else went forward on my behalf. All I missed was the thrill. No lives were endangered.
Great true story, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
    Lol! Well, thank you so much Sally for the kind words, great review and you!
Comment from lyenochka
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That's hilarious! Thank you for sharing this fun memory. I would think much of the training wasn't fun at all but you remembered this highlight when the call of nature turned out to be a call to duty!
Those weren't real grenades were they? How were the others kept safe?

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
    Lol! No, no real grenades. Everyone in my unit was safe. Thanks so much for the great review!
reply by lyenochka on 10-Mar-2025
    Whew! Good to know!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
    Roger that!
Comment from Richard Frohm
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Harry, what a great story and what a way to earn a medal. You might be the only one in the history of the U.S. Army to win one that way. Well written, well laid out. Plus, it is funny. It is always nice to see the humous side of the military. Like my time as a police officer, there were some seriously funny stuff.

Great writing!!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
    Well, thank you so much Richard. I truly appreciate the great review, kind words, and your service!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Bravery has many names and forms, and you had a moment of brilliance when instead of panicking you found an ingenious way to sound the alarm. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
    Thank you so much for the great review! I truly appreciate that, the kind words and you!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Well, mother nature's call certainly saved the day!! Was it put on your award, how and why you were awarded it? It's a fun true story to tell the grandkids! Lol. What a fabulous story. So funny, though. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
    Lol! Thank you so much Sandra for the great review. No, it was not put on the award. I truly appreciate you!
Comment from MissMerri
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What a fascinating story! I enjoyed reading this very much. Your style of writing is very descriptive and paints clear pictures in the mind of the reader. That's the kind of writing I most enjoy. My only suggestion might be to leave out commas when there is the word "and" between phrases or a series. Fewer commas makes for less distraction while reading. Good work and great story-telling. No excess words and just enough description and action to keep things flowing. Very enjoyable. MM

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
    Well, thank you so much MM. I truly appreciate the great review, kind words and you!
Comment from Sanku
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It was a very informative post. I didnt know about war games and I didnt know the particular use of the word 'tinkle'. Any way you got honoured because of the tinkle.. that is interesting.funny too

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
    Thank you so much Sanku for the great review. I truly appreciate you!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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You do a really good job of telling an amusing story in the middle of a pretend battlefield. We drove through the Black Forest in the rain and it was one of the darkest places I've ever seen. Your title adds another element of fun to the story. I must admit the word "aggressing" was one I didn't know.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
    Thank you so much Carol for the kind words and great review!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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That is too cute. I mean, I'm sure at the time it didn't feel so cute, but they way you told it, did. It was well written and very engaging. I've learned a lot about war games from you. I've heard the term, but never really had it explained.

Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
    Thank you so much Rhonda for the great review! I truly appreciate that!
Comment from jmdg1954
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Hmmm... what if nature hadn't called at that moment? Did you ever wonder if the final outcome may have been different?

Nah. I would just accept it for what it is.

Great backstory leading to when "relief" was at hand.

Good story,
John

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
    Lol! Oh yes, John. I have thought about that. Thanks for the great review. I truly appreciate that!