No - Say It Ain't So!
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Comment from Karen Cherry
Keep the good work. You could get rid of the abortion stuff by saying that poor ladies getting abortions helps lower the medical debt by getting rid of free loafers, And, If guys want to fool around they don't any little juniors spoiling the fun do they? Forget that other people telling women women what to do with our bodies is obscene, and it treats us as slaves with no rights over our bodies, just hit them in the wallet. Karen
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Keep the good work. You could get rid of the abortion stuff by saying that poor ladies getting abortions helps lower the medical debt by getting rid of free loafers, And, If guys want to fool around they don't any little juniors spoiling the fun do they? Forget that other people telling women women what to do with our bodies is obscene, and it treats us as slaves with no rights over our bodies, just hit them in the wallet. Karen
Comment Written 04-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
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Thank you.
'Fraid this tale is a bit heavy on the male side. The only females are Trump's Chief of Staff, Melania, and Ivanka (who, thanks to my wife, I've renamed Pate'). (as in Pah-tay)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is interesting and well written. The dialogues flow smoothly and are authentic as they can be in this story. I'm glad your writing this because it takes us all to express that we do not support Trump and his ways, what he is doing.
I was secretly hoping he would've dug for the Ukrainian minerals himself and would've been blown away by a lingering Russian landmine. How fitting would that have been.
Excellent post, again,
Alex :)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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This is interesting and well written. The dialogues flow smoothly and are authentic as they can be in this story. I'm glad your writing this because it takes us all to express that we do not support Trump and his ways, what he is doing.
I was secretly hoping he would've dug for the Ukrainian minerals himself and would've been blown away by a lingering Russian landmine. How fitting would that have been.
Excellent post, again,
Alex :)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much!
I have it all written, but Trump is providing material so fast I wish I could go back and rewrite.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
He sounds like he's trying to give the VP an ulcer. That might get him to resign. This is too amusing to quit. I want to see a little blood or at least a sick stomach to ruin others' lives. Phil is maybe too nice a Trump.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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He sounds like he's trying to give the VP an ulcer. That might get him to resign. This is too amusing to quit. I want to see a little blood or at least a sick stomach to ruin others' lives. Phil is maybe too nice a Trump.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Smiley face here!
Thank you.
There's a little tension coming. Just ho-o-o-o-o-old on.
Comment from jim vecchio
Just one chapter, huh? Anyhow, your continuing tale continues well! Last review, I told of my morphing into the Stooges. Today, I tell of a true event which concerned others. Trump and Zelensky were holding a meeting when Trump suddenly morphed into Moe. He poked Zelensky in his eyes and pressed his head in a vice. As the news stations were on a time-delay, these actions were edited out of the "live report". As the time-delay ended, Trump morphed back into his natural loving self.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Just one chapter, huh? Anyhow, your continuing tale continues well! Last review, I told of my morphing into the Stooges. Today, I tell of a true event which concerned others. Trump and Zelensky were holding a meeting when Trump suddenly morphed into Moe. He poked Zelensky in his eyes and pressed his head in a vice. As the news stations were on a time-delay, these actions were edited out of the "live report". As the time-delay ended, Trump morphed back into his natural loving self.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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LOL
Prob'ly a bit too unChristlike of me, but would that Zelensky had had a 9mm on his hip.
Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story is fast moving! The dialogue feels so real - it's tense - full of personality. I loved how you built up the pressure with each name mentioned. The pacing is fantastic. That final handshake felt like the perfect power move. This was a wild ride! I enjoyed every second of it! Keep going!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Your story is fast moving! The dialogue feels so real - it's tense - full of personality. I loved how you built up the pressure with each name mentioned. The pacing is fantastic. That final handshake felt like the perfect power move. This was a wild ride! I enjoyed every second of it! Keep going!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Thank you.
I'm half way sorry I have it all written - Musk and Trump are giving me more fodder daily.
Comment from Wendy G
Trump over the last few days has been shocking - that public berating of Zelensky, and such unbelievable rudeness, to say nothing of the rambling and irrelevant twists of "facts". . . Unbelievable. I would prefer Phil Jansen any day!! Trump's bullying annd arrogance nearly made me physically ill.
Ah, I 'd better stop my rant. Sorry. Great piece.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Trump over the last few days has been shocking - that public berating of Zelensky, and such unbelievable rudeness, to say nothing of the rambling and irrelevant twists of "facts". . . Unbelievable. I would prefer Phil Jansen any day!! Trump's bullying annd arrogance nearly made me physically ill.
Ah, I 'd better stop my rant. Sorry. Great piece.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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I'm ready to march. Trump is truly in love with Putin. And now to hear from the Republican leaders in defense.... I'd better stop 'my' rant now.
Thank you for your very nice review and for your support.
Comment from lyenochka
Someday, may the Lord change the sequence of events that led to us having to feel so ashamed of our POTUS.
Good job with this post. And I thought it was funny about what Vance will never live down since his comments about the cats and dogs...
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Someday, may the Lord change the sequence of events that led to us having to feel so ashamed of our POTUS.
Good job with this post. And I thought it was funny about what Vance will never live down since his comments about the cats and dogs...
Comment Written 01-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Thank you. I believe Trump is the reason that America is not referenced in scripture at all, not even peripherally in prophecy. Trump is working to strengthen the bear.
thank you again for your review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your chapter. The dialogue was excellent. The tension between Phil and the Vice President felt real. The part with the pen and the back and forth about the Supreme Court was so funny. It's a fun read and I'm excited to see where you go with this! Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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I really enjoyed your chapter. The dialogue was excellent. The tension between Phil and the Vice President felt real. The part with the pen and the back and forth about the Supreme Court was so funny. It's a fun read and I'm excited to see where you go with this! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2025
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Thank you. I truly appreciate your reviews.
