No - Say It Ain't So!
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "NO! Say It Ain't So! Ch 4"I woke up one morning feeling...
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I am really enjoying your work on this, you just can't keep it crazy enough. Today Trump wants to give most of Ukraine to Russia because Ukraine started the war, and he hates NATO and wants it dead.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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I am really enjoying your work on this, you just can't keep it crazy enough. Today Trump wants to give most of Ukraine to Russia because Ukraine started the war, and he hates NATO and wants it dead.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Thank you. When I wrote this I wanted to stay in my world, not come back out to reality.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Wayne,
You have an interesting book going here. You use the literary theme of switching places to show what another person would do in the place of Trump if they could. Your narrative is very convincing and entertaining.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Hi Wayne,
You have an interesting book going here. You use the literary theme of switching places to show what another person would do in the place of Trump if they could. Your narrative is very convincing and entertaining.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Thank you. I catch myself happily lost in that world.
I appreciate your fine review.
Comment from Karen Cherry
Phil as trump, figures out Tom is a space alien that did the switch later, doesn't he? And tell us that trump as Phil gets beat up in jail when he runs his mouth and succumbs to lethal injuries. right? Karen
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Phil as trump, figures out Tom is a space alien that did the switch later, doesn't he? And tell us that trump as Phil gets beat up in jail when he runs his mouth and succumbs to lethal injuries. right? Karen
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Laughin' here, Boss!
Your ending is better than mine, although I think you will be pleased.
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Well, I am sure yours is good. It has been so far. Karen
Comment from jim vecchio
Your story continues in a logical, illogical manner that perfectly suits the theme. I disagree with the orange spray episode, however. I once morphed into Osgood, the purple-haired clown from the local Hungarian Social Club. Imagine my surprise when I discerned that was his actual hair. I had to twist a hundred and fifty various colored balloons into zoo animals before our bodies switched back.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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Your story continues in a logical, illogical manner that perfectly suits the theme. I disagree with the orange spray episode, however. I once morphed into Osgood, the purple-haired clown from the local Hungarian Social Club. Imagine my surprise when I discerned that was his actual hair. I had to twist a hundred and fifty various colored balloons into zoo animals before our bodies switched back.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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LOLing! (That's how everyone but old codgers like you and I laugh.)
Thank you for your fun review and for the six stars!
Comment from Wendy G
It's quite a balancing act, trying to llok and sound like Trump but at the same time put a halt to what he's doing and undoing. Your writing is doing well to get that balance. Wish Phil J could work his magic in real life! It won't be long before T wants Australia to be part of the US - or he will insist on expanding his empire over here.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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It's quite a balancing act, trying to llok and sound like Trump but at the same time put a halt to what he's doing and undoing. Your writing is doing well to get that balance. Wish Phil J could work his magic in real life! It won't be long before T wants Australia to be part of the US - or he will insist on expanding his empire over here.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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52nd state.
What a baffoon!
Thank you for your very nice review.
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He is beyond ridiculous There are very few here who think much of him (unfortunately the leader of the opposition who may well become Prime Minister is a fan - he has adopted many of the same ideas, thinks it proves him tough.
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Too many right-wingers are such bullies.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your chapter pulls me right. The dialogue is excellent. The scene with the poisoned butter was especially intense. And that speech at the U.N. was so well done. Your writing keeps me hooked. I can't wait to see how this all plays out!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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Your chapter pulls me right. The dialogue is excellent. The scene with the poisoned butter was especially intense. And that speech at the U.N. was so well done. Your writing keeps me hooked. I can't wait to see how this all plays out!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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Thank you.
It was hard not to go overboard writing this, correcting all Trump's errors and creating an incredibly perfect world.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha another amazing chapter and just imagine if it was for real:) Liked this part: ""Career bureaucrats. Nobody gets fired. They're just doing their jobs. They worked for me four years ago. It's not their fault that the team changes colors every four years. You can move people around, but nobody gets sent off to Nome or Siberia." I shot everybody the felonious glare. They got it." Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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Ha, ha, ha another amazing chapter and just imagine if it was for real:) Liked this part: ""Career bureaucrats. Nobody gets fired. They're just doing their jobs. They worked for me four years ago. It's not their fault that the team changes colors every four years. You can move people around, but nobody gets sent off to Nome or Siberia." I shot everybody the felonious glare. They got it." Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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Thank you.
And by contrast, look what's happening today. Officials not fired (without cause) are resigning in protest. We will soon lose our expertise and Humpty will not be puttable together again - just what MAGA wants.
Comment from lyenochka
Glad the "possessed" Trump is making some sane changes and that Tom is so alert so that he protects from these various assaults. I guess it was like that when there were other tyrants in charge like kings and caesars. Someone needed to watch out for food poisoning etc. But the underwear thing is new to our times!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Glad the "possessed" Trump is making some sane changes and that Tom is so alert so that he protects from these various assaults. I guess it was like that when there were other tyrants in charge like kings and caesars. Someone needed to watch out for food poisoning etc. But the underwear thing is new to our times!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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underwear - Thanks to Putin.
Thank you for your very nice review.
Phil has to draw a fine line between doing the right thing and letting Trump be trump enough to influence the next election (he thinks)
