As daybreak comes
A Looping Acrostic27 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are deep, descriptive and creative. The last stanza
I found sad, as memories flooded the dream. The author's description was
intense as daybreak comes. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork goes well with both the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
  |
The author's words are deep, descriptive and creative. The last stanza
I found sad, as memories flooded the dream. The author's description was
intense as daybreak comes. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork goes well with both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
-
Thank you for your wonderful comments as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent Looping Acrostic poem about abuse. Beautiful presentation.
I worked as an advocate for victims of rape and Domestic Violence. It's important to share this kind of information.
I would add the crisis line....
National Domestic Violence Hotline
Hours: 24/7 Call 800-799-7233
Or 988 lifeline.org
Well done, Kym
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
|
Excellent Looping Acrostic poem about abuse. Beautiful presentation.
I worked as an advocate for victims of rape and Domestic Violence. It's important to share this kind of information.
I would add the crisis line....
National Domestic Violence Hotline
Hours: 24/7 Call 800-799-7233
Or 988 lifeline.org
Well done, Kym
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
-
Thank you very much, I will do that, that sort of work must have been hard, but I think rewarding, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
This was hard to read. Not because it was poorly written (it wasn't), nor was the language not my own (it was). It was hard to read because the emotional depth was so great and powerful. The pain of the subject is something that we each feel to some degree, but we put out of our minds because it is so hard to face.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
|
This was hard to read. Not because it was poorly written (it wasn't), nor was the language not my own (it was). It was hard to read because the emotional depth was so great and powerful. The pain of the subject is something that we each feel to some degree, but we put out of our minds because it is so hard to face.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
-
Thank you for your wonderful comments, yes, sometimes we don't want to see, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Ulla
This is a very dark subject which unfortunately takes place every single minute of the day somewhere in the world. I was very moved by your poem. All best, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
|
This is a very dark subject which unfortunately takes place every single minute of the day somewhere in the world. I was very moved by your poem. All best, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
-
Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is powerful and truly deep in its message.
You touch on a subject that is difficult on so many levels. To write of abuse is hard, to write it in a way that touches the pain, you have managed that.
As you say, these days, all too prevalent, or is it just more reported on.
Who knows the truth of that?
Well done and thank you for sharing.
Tim
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
 |
This is powerful and truly deep in its message.
You touch on a subject that is difficult on so many levels. To write of abuse is hard, to write it in a way that touches the pain, you have managed that.
As you say, these days, all too prevalent, or is it just more reported on.
Who knows the truth of that?
Well done and thank you for sharing.
Tim
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
-
Thank you, Tim, for your most encouraging and uplifting comments, and generous six stars, I like to try different forms, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Karen Cherry
Nicely done double poem. Both an acrostic and a loop poem. And the topic is also very delicate to do. What a splendid piece of work this is. Kudos to you. Karen
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
|
Nicely done double poem. Both an acrostic and a loop poem. And the topic is also very delicate to do. What a splendid piece of work this is. Kudos to you. Karen
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
-
Thank you so very much, Karen, these challenges help me with my gramma, syllables, and understanding, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
-
I challenge myself as well. My next goal is to write a biography. Karen
Comment from Pearl Edwards
There is far too much and there always seems to be those willing to undertake such horrid abuse of other. A very dark subject but one we should never ignore. Well written in this acrostic loop, kahpot.
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
|
There is far too much and there always seems to be those willing to undertake such horrid abuse of other. A very dark subject but one we should never ignore. Well written in this acrostic loop, kahpot.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
-
Thank you, Valda, yes, there is too much abuse going undetected these days, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice looping acrostic and I very much enjoyed listening to. It was very well when is right out loud I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a wonderful day and may God bless you.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
|
This is a very nice looping acrostic and I very much enjoyed listening to. It was very well when is right out loud I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a wonderful day and may God bless you.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
-
Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Nicki.B
This is excellent. An acrostic loop poem, a technique I adventures tried. I really enjoyed this, your words are quite powerful and it's a very dark emotional poem. I want to reach out and give this girl and big hug and poem help. You've really done a great job to connect with the reader emotionally. Well done!!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
|
This is excellent. An acrostic loop poem, a technique I adventures tried. I really enjoyed this, your words are quite powerful and it's a very dark emotional poem. I want to reach out and give this girl and big hug and poem help. You've really done a great job to connect with the reader emotionally. Well done!!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
-
Thank you, Nicki, for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****khpot
Comment from teafor2
kahpot, this is such a challenging and ambitious accomplishment carried
out flawlessly...The looping/folding/doubling and/or repeating of these
letters/words are difficult enough, but to include the cogent abuse case is
superb...Your sober write/subject is outstanding work and deserves a
wider viewership. teafor2
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
|
kahpot, this is such a challenging and ambitious accomplishment carried
out flawlessly...The looping/folding/doubling and/or repeating of these
letters/words are difficult enough, but to include the cogent abuse case is
superb...Your sober write/subject is outstanding work and deserves a
wider viewership. teafor2
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
-
Thank you so very much, teafor2, for your encouraging comments and six stars, it took a bit of time and a few revisits, I find that if I challenge myself, it helps me with gramma and syllables, which I am learning, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
-
Kahpot, you are welcome...You/your
well written work deserves the top rating. teafor2
