A Walk In My Shoes
Be careful! What goes around, comes around.36 total reviews
Comment from RebelRose
This is quite an interesting story with a lesson to be learned. Good dialogue and description of characters. Good kluck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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This is quite an interesting story with a lesson to be learned. Good dialogue and description of characters. Good kluck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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Thanks so much for this great review and rating. I'm happy you enjoyed this. It was fun to write. Thanks, too, for the good wishes in the contest,
Sandollar
Comment from findingmyroom
Wow. I love the supernatural feel to this piece. Indeed, Kira learned about karma the hard way, and I'm cheering for the old man all the way. Your story is complete, with great dialogue and details; nothing to suggest for improvement.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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Wow. I love the supernatural feel to this piece. Indeed, Kira learned about karma the hard way, and I'm cheering for the old man all the way. Your story is complete, with great dialogue and details; nothing to suggest for improvement.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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Thanks so much for this great review and five-star rating. I am glad to know you enjoyed this. I had a blast writing it. It's all about karma.
Sandollar
Comment from BeKind
WOW! This story is incredible. You had me from beginning to finish. I am begging for more. The Twilight Zone, WOW! Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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WOW! This story is incredible. You had me from beginning to finish. I am begging for more. The Twilight Zone, WOW! Well done.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and rating. I am honored you enjoyed this so much. I had a great time writing it. Yes, I was always a fan of TZ.
Sandollar
Comment from Rama Rao
Although the initial part interested me, the story as a whole has confused me thorughly.
I couldn't make out whether it was something to do with paranormal or second reincarnation.
The transformation of Kira was abrupt and not properly conveyed to the reader. Was it her guilt complex or was it retribution of God?
Whatever, the reader should be given a hint, in my opinion.
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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Although the initial part interested me, the story as a whole has confused me thorughly.
I couldn't make out whether it was something to do with paranormal or second reincarnation.
The transformation of Kira was abrupt and not properly conveyed to the reader. Was it her guilt complex or was it retribution of God?
Whatever, the reader should be given a hint, in my opinion.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I always strive to be clear to the reader, so I'm sorry it was confusing to you. It's a simple story about karma and consequences.
Sandollar
Comment from Thesis
That was sick. In a good way, of course. Wow, she became the person she hit. How cool is that. I wonder how the guy felt, being trandformed into a thirty-four year old white chick.
Lol. That is so wrong in so many ways, lol. - Thesis
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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That was sick. In a good way, of course. Wow, she became the person she hit. How cool is that. I wonder how the guy felt, being trandformed into a thirty-four year old white chick.
Lol. That is so wrong in so many ways, lol. - Thesis
Comment Written 16-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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Thanks so much for your great review and stars. You know how karma is. I think the old man is going to have a ball in his new body and skin color. It's going to be quite a change. Glad you enjoyed.
Sandollar
Comment from Harrisa
I enjoyed reading this story. I like it when people get what is coming to them in a big way. This couldn't get any bigger. If we don't have the time to do what's right, then we are probably not doing the right thing.
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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I enjoyed reading this story. I like it when people get what is coming to them in a big way. This couldn't get any bigger. If we don't have the time to do what's right, then we are probably not doing the right thing.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2010
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and five-star rating. Your point is well taken, and I,too,like it when people get what's coming to them.
Thanks again,
Sandollar
