Men from Mars~Women from Venus
Just a Silly Fictional about not wanting to be opposite sex50 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
Oh, I loved this! It made me laugh out loud. Your rhymes are so creative and so clever and the meter is spot-on. You tell a cute and winning tale and I would guess most readers will relate to your POV too. I thoroughly enjoyed this. So cute!! MM
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Oh, I loved this! It made me laugh out loud. Your rhymes are so creative and so clever and the meter is spot-on. You tell a cute and winning tale and I would guess most readers will relate to your POV too. I thoroughly enjoyed this. So cute!! MM
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Haha, I am laughing now too cause it still has me scratching my head, wondering what I was thinking by doing this prompt. Thank you for the great review, your most wonderful and fun sense of humor, and your delightful words and kindness and six stars.
I will be coming your way on Sunday.
Thanks again for the smile too
Love, Debi
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Haha, I am laughing now too cause it still has me scratching my head, wondering what I was thinking by doing this prompt. Thank you for the great review, your most wonderful and fun sense of humor, and your delightful words and kindness and six stars.
I will be coming your way on Sunday.
Thanks again for the smile too
Love, Debi
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Haha, I am laughing now too cause it still has me scratching my head, wondering what I was thinking by doing this prompt. Thank you for the great review, your most wonderful and fun sense of humor, and your delightful words and kindness and six stars.
I will be coming your way on Sunday.
Thanks again for the smile too
Love, Debi
Comment from Arabellesmom
Your writing is amazing I love it so much. Nice to meet you, I'm relatively new here to fan story, and already noticing what a wonderful group with such talent. Beautiful writing
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Your writing is amazing I love it so much. Nice to meet you, I'm relatively new here to fan story, and already noticing what a wonderful group with such talent. Beautiful writing
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
Comment from nomi338
If I was a woman AI would probably have the heaviest voice ever heard from a female. I would still love boxing, basketball, and probably like looking at women. Some thing, many things I like now, I would still like if I were somebody else.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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If I was a woman AI would probably have the heaviest voice ever heard from a female. I would still love boxing, basketball, and probably like looking at women. Some thing, many things I like now, I would still like if I were somebody else.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Haha, you are so funny and so sweet. I started writing it but I just couldn't do write it. LOL.
Thank you so very much for all your kind comments, Nomi. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear BBBB
Love, Debi
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Jo worries, God did not make a mistake when he made us who and what he made us to be. After which he made sure we found each other.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so full of personality! I love how you took the whole "Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus" idea and made it fun . The poem flows so well. The humor really shines through - especially with the bit about gardenias and sports cars! The ending is fantastic too. It made me smile the whole way through. Such a fun read!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Your poem is so full of personality! I love how you took the whole "Men are from Mars, Women are from Venus" idea and made it fun . The poem flows so well. The humor really shines through - especially with the bit about gardenias and sports cars! The ending is fantastic too. It made me smile the whole way through. Such a fun read!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Michael, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
Debi,
I think you did a masterful job here with this clubs challenge.
Two lines stood out for me:
One - when you keep hubby around to open the jars,
Two - you don't to be a man because you don't want a p____s.
I thought that was comical and perfect not spelling it out having the reader fill in the blanks!
A fun read. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Love ya,
John
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Debi,
I think you did a masterful job here with this clubs challenge.
Two lines stood out for me:
One - when you keep hubby around to open the jars,
Two - you don't to be a man because you don't want a p____s.
I thought that was comical and perfect not spelling it out having the reader fill in the blanks!
A fun read. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Love ya,
John
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Ooh John, you are a treasure, but this was not one of my better ideas. LOL.
I had already promoted it before I realized it all needed changing. I tried to write it how Gypsy said on the prompt but couldn't do it.. I really can't imagine myself as a man. Haha
And I am embarrassed about the P line but it's my only laugh. So what to do? Do you think I am out of line? It's just a body part. Well you know what I mean.. ha.
Thanks for making me feel better about it. I got two six stars right off the bat and that wasn't enough to make me feel secure with it. But you helped a lot.
Thanks bro. Love ya lots and lots. Debi
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I think the way you presented the "P" word worked to perfection!
Don't be embarrassed.
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Thanks Sweetie. You are the best!
Comment from Angel Debbie
Oh my goodness, Debi what a predicament this would be, But I am with you, I wouldn't want the thing men have between their legs either just swinging. LOL But I would sure love to see a man with big boobs breast a feeding that would be funny. Super write I enjoyed it and got the old mind moving.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Oh my goodness, Debi what a predicament this would be, But I am with you, I wouldn't want the thing men have between their legs either just swinging. LOL But I would sure love to see a man with big boobs breast a feeding that would be funny. Super write I enjoyed it and got the old mind moving.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Debbie, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from tinkervic
Very good at Rhyming your poem flows very well. And the picture and song goes so well with the poem. I could take some lessons form you as I cannot write good poetry. I like the line that you don't want to be a man you don't want a penis haha.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Very good at Rhyming your poem flows very well. And the picture and song goes so well with the poem. I could take some lessons form you as I cannot write good poetry. I like the line that you don't want to be a man you don't want a penis haha.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Haha, you are so much fun, Vic. I am assuming that is your real name?
I sure appreciate your awesome review, your kind comments and your generous six stars. Thank you so very much, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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My name is Victoria I just used that as my user name,
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My name is Victoria I just used that as my user name,
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Thank you Victoria. I hope that is ok to call you by your first name?
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oh yes that's fine. nice meeting you!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Debi,
This is a beautiful poem. It's a little different for you , but I like it. It is well organized and flows beautifully. I like the different colors to depict the sexes.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Debi,
This is a beautiful poem. It's a little different for you , but I like it. It is well organized and flows beautifully. I like the different colors to depict the sexes.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Cecilia, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Sally Law
Dearest Debi,
Well, having been blessed with SO many men in my life, I can honestly say, no thank you. I love being the ultra femme sex and female. My boys had a sign on tneir bedroom door that read: "No girls allowed Xcept for MoMmY." It was so adorable visiting their kingdom and being let aboard their pirate ship.
Love your poem and inquiry.
Love you too, my friend.
100% Girl, Sally Marie XOs
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Dearest Debi,
Well, having been blessed with SO many men in my life, I can honestly say, no thank you. I love being the ultra femme sex and female. My boys had a sign on tneir bedroom door that read: "No girls allowed Xcept for MoMmY." It was so adorable visiting their kingdom and being let aboard their pirate ship.
Love your poem and inquiry.
Love you too, my friend.
100% Girl, Sally Marie XOs
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Sally, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with my P line. LOL
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
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I agree, the P is such an odd thing but it sure does it's job when aptly applied correctly. Smiling big...
I must mention going to the bathroom is more complicated for us ladies, especially back in the day before public restrooms and rest stops existed. Remember that? I remember having to go in the woods a few times and it was really, really cold!! Men have it easier. I'm still glad to be me though. :))
Sal XOs
Comment from Begin Again
A little different for you, ebi, but sometimes it's okay to come out of our box and be different. It was humorous and fun. I think I want to be who I am though...not perfect by a long shot but it's who God meant me to be.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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A little different for you, ebi, but sometimes it's okay to come out of our box and be different. It was humorous and fun. I think I want to be who I am though...not perfect by a long shot but it's who God meant me to be.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hi Carol, you are always so sweet. Thank you so very much for all your kind comments. This was a little out of my norm and I am hope I wasn't out of line with the P line.
Thanks again for the wonderful review, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
