Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

This is a sweet poem for your daughter, Michelle. Is she your first-born? A little fix needed in stanza two: 'But also sweetness through and (through).'
Doesn't it feel weird when our kids turn 50? Nice pictures of Michelle. I'm sure you're very proud of all she's done. Blessings to you both, and a happy birthday to Michelle. Carol

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

LOL, yeah I need to fix that. Valda told me about it a few minutes ago and I better get it done. Darn auto correct or whatever that is that finishes your words. With my eyes, I expect them to know what they are talking about. I will fix that now. Thanks so much, Carol. I appreciate it.

Thanks for the sweet words and the wonderful review. Thanks again.
Love, Debi

reply by Carol Clark2 on 23-Mar-2025

You're welcome. Yes, auto correct must type in as many errors as it does corrections! LOL. Have a blessed week.

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

LOL, I have never had that happen before. That is either scary or funny. Hahaha.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

through and though
through

Debi, she is a very beautiful daughter, of course she has you for her mother and you are beautiful too. This is a very lovely birthday poem for Michelle. Thank you for sharing with us! love and blessings and Happy Birthday to Michelle and may God bless her with many more! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Awe, Teri, thanks for treating my eldest daughter, Michelle, like she was one of the crew. This birthday was so important to me, so I was happy everyone was ok with me doing it FanStory way.
Thanks for the kind words for her and her poem. Love, Debi

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is a lovely 50th birthday poem for your daughter and beautifully expressed Debi. Just one small edit - through and though (through)
I hope you all have lovely celebrations for Michelle
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Valda, LOL, thanks for catching my auto-correct's typo. Or whatever the name of what fills in your words and sentences. I can't believe they got it wrong. But I sure appreciate you pointing it out to me.

And thanks for treating Michelle, like she was one of us. This birthday was so important to me, so I wanted to do it FanStory way.
Thanks for the kind words for her and her poem. I do appreciate it.
Love, Debi

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is such a beautiful tribute to your beautiful daughter, Debi! I love the collage you made and loved how you said:
"My time with them is Deja vu in them I see a part of you".
That's so cool I don't quite see my daughter in her kids but I'm sure there are attributes there.
Happy Birthday to you amazing Michelle!!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Hi Helen, I am so very proud of her. She has worked her way up the ladder and is a Vice President of a world wide crop insurance company and she is in charge of Human Resources in all of North and Central America.

It means a lot to me that you liked those lines. It's amazing how we all see differently. The couple pictures of your daughter and her kids I thought looked just like her. I got a kick out of those who thought Michelle and I looked alike. She looks just like her dad, my son, Jason looks like me and our baby, Bridget is a little of each.

Thanks for the kind words for her and her poem. I do appreciate it.
Love, Debi

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Debi,

This is a beautiful birthday wish for your sweet daughter. I can feel the mother's pride oozing out of your pores. You did a great job with this poem.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Hey Cecilia, yes, I am very proud of her. She is a vice president of a large world wide crop insurance company and she handles all of North America.

So thanks for treating Michelle, like she was one of us. This birthday was so important to me, so I wanted to do it FanStory way.
Thanks for the kind words for her and her poem. I do appreciate it.
Love, Debi

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 24-Mar-2025

You're daughter is well accomplished.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It's marvellous having children, especially when they are so lovely in nature and in face, and then they have children that make them proud, it is a truly amazing thing, making and producing a legacy to this world, beautifully written Debi, congratulations, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025

Hey Roy, thanks so much for this awesome review and for the kind words for Michelle. You are so right, my friend. Yeah, I am pretty proud of her, so thanks so much.
Love, Debi

reply by royowen on 25-Mar-2025

Well done Debi

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

This is a wonderful birthday poem for your daughter, Debi and I can see from reading this piece just how much she means to you and how proud you are. I hope she has a great birthday.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025

Hi Jacob, and thanks so much for this awesome review and for the kind words for Michelle. Yeah, I am pretty proud of her, so thanks so much.
Love, Debi

Comment from jmdg1954

Exceptional

Awe...
Such loving words as you describe
Your precious daughter has filled you with pride,
For all these years you've been able to boast
With a smile that could be seen coast to coast.

Debi, I hope you have a great day with your daughter and family. You deserve it,

Love ya, sis.
You know who.,,

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Thanks so very much John. I love your poetry, bro!! Very creative.

I am very proud of her. She is a vice president of a large world wide crop insurance company and she handles all of North America.

This birthday was so important to me, as it was fun to do it FanStory way. Thanks so much for the beautiful six stars.
Thanks for the kind words for her and her poem. I do appreciate it.
Lotsa love, Debi

Comment from Angel Debbie

Exceptional

Six stars for a wonderful Mom you made me cry tears of happiness as I read that heart full of love. My Mom is gone 30 some years now. I never really new her as Dad always kept me busy with him. I sometimes wonder did she feel like this toward us kids. Thanks Deb for this wonderful card of thoughts you shared with us here. I bet your daughter just loved it as I did.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Hi Debbie, I am so sorry about your mom, but OMGosh, we have so much in common. My mom died when she was 58 in 1993 so it has been thirty years in August for me. I learned how to be the best mom and grandma from my mom.

About Michelle, I am very proud of her. She is a vice president of a large world wide crop insurance company and she handles all of North America.

So thanks for treating Michelle, like she was one of us. This birthday was so important to me, so I wanted do it FanStory way. Thank you so much for the lovely six stars.
Thanks for the kind words for her and her poem. I do appreciate it. And you are so special!!
Love, Debi

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your daughter, Michelle's, fiftieth birthday tribute with us. I enjoyed reading and I am positive she will cherish this wonderful poem. Give her a birthday hug from me.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025

Hi Barb, I sure will give her a hug for you. Thank you. I am very proud of her. She is a vice president of a large world wide crop insurance company and she handles all of North America.

So thanks for treating Michelle, like she was one of us. This birthday was so important to me, so I wanted do it FanStory way.
Thanks for the kind words for her and her poem. I do appreciate it.
Love, Debi