A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from Teri7
This is another great chapter. You have such a great mind for writing these types of novels. I am so glad you are on fan story with us so I can read them until I purchase them. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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This is another great chapter. You have such a great mind for writing these types of novels. I am so glad you are on fan story with us so I can read them until I purchase them. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
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You are so welcome! I am really enjoying this novel too!
Comment from forestport12
You really kept me in the moment with the realistic dialogue. It really engaged my mind's eye. I had to read that intro to remind of what happened. How he found her in a wreck. You created some anticipation on how or if this relationship will deepen. I'm already having a good deal of epathy for the girl character here.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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You really kept me in the moment with the realistic dialogue. It really engaged my mind's eye. I had to read that intro to remind of what happened. How he found her in a wreck. You created some anticipation on how or if this relationship will deepen. I'm already having a good deal of epathy for the girl character here.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement. I needed to hear it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Barbara,
This is a great book so far. It is coming right along. Do I see a future romance be the good dr and Rebekah? Some how I have a feeling that is going to happen.
Well done and keep writing so I know what happens next.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Barbara,
This is a great book so far. It is coming right along. Do I see a future romance be the good dr and Rebekah? Some how I have a feeling that is going to happen.
Well done and keep writing so I know what happens next.
Cecilia
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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We'll have wait and see. Rebeka has a few problems. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome my friend.
Comment from judiverse
Glad you're adding a dog into the mix, again. Now the print is really big! II had an experience similar to Rebeka's several years ago. I was driving in rainy conditions and my car hydroplaned. I ran into a mailbox, too. The mailbox was damaged was the only thing that happened. I do know of a young girl still in high who was quite a writer, but she certainly hasn't written anything that made her an overnight sensation. Funny insight into Rebeka never having worn pants. She must have really been kept under her father's thumb. She seems to have a lot of baggage. Now, why would you be inspired to have a not-so-nice agent in your story? Hope things are working out for you with your publishing endeavors. judi
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Glad you're adding a dog into the mix, again. Now the print is really big! II had an experience similar to Rebeka's several years ago. I was driving in rainy conditions and my car hydroplaned. I ran into a mailbox, too. The mailbox was damaged was the only thing that happened. I do know of a young girl still in high who was quite a writer, but she certainly hasn't written anything that made her an overnight sensation. Funny insight into Rebeka never having worn pants. She must have really been kept under her father's thumb. She seems to have a lot of baggage. Now, why would you be inspired to have a not-so-nice agent in your story? Hope things are working out for you with your publishing endeavors. judi
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Thank you for understanding. Now, I've had a complaint about the larger print. Made it a littler smaller.
Comment from jmdg1954
Okay. This is the second chapter and storyline is getting established.
I'm curious to find out her relationship with her father growing up.
One correction to look at when Tyler was talking to Elizabeth....
I'm wondering is if she can borrow some." (I think the word "is" is extra)
Me personally am not a big fan in reading fonts so big.
But it's your story and post, do as you feel is right.
Have a good day...
John
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Okay. This is the second chapter and storyline is getting established.
I'm curious to find out her relationship with her father growing up.
One correction to look at when Tyler was talking to Elizabeth....
I'm wondering is if she can borrow some." (I think the word "is" is extra)
Me personally am not a big fan in reading fonts so big.
But it's your story and post, do as you feel is right.
Have a good day...
John
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the catch. I have fixed and made the print smaller.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your first chapter! The way you introduced Tyler and Rebeka felt so natural. I was pulled right into their conversation. The little touches like Tyler not being a fan of dog kisses added to the story. And what a twist at the end with Rebeka's thoughts about pants. I can't wait to see where her story goes next.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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I really enjoyed your first chapter! The way you introduced Tyler and Rebeka felt so natural. I was pulled right into their conversation. The little touches like Tyler not being a fan of dog kisses added to the story. And what a twist at the end with Rebeka's thoughts about pants. I can't wait to see where her story goes next.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You hit us with a few concerning factors here Barbara as you open your story about this poor distressed woman who has more than one problem on her plate, good luck with this story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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You hit us with a few concerning factors here Barbara as you open your story about this poor distressed woman who has more than one problem on her plate, good luck with this story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Thank you for understanding. I'm hoping it works.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, she is in a bad way. I think it's more than a friend who has embezzled money, she is so upset. I think the doctor sounds nice, and his family, aunt and his nieces. I'm going to enjoy this story, my friend. Well done.
PS Love the large print, it made it so much easier for me to read! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Oh, she is in a bad way. I think it's more than a friend who has embezzled money, she is so upset. I think the doctor sounds nice, and his family, aunt and his nieces. I'm going to enjoy this story, my friend. Well done.
PS Love the large print, it made it so much easier for me to read! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Thank you for understanding.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I was going to ask why the font is so very large, but I guess you wanted it that way. There is a white "box" behind your lettering; you can get rid of that by going to edit, then go to the box on the far right side next to the font color, I think it's background color. Anyway, you want "automatic", but highlight your text first. Then hit "save" and it should disappear.
It sounds like another "romcom" is off to the races. Did you say only two chapters for this in your first post? I can't imagine how you'd tie up the story in two, or maybe I misunderstood.
Thanks, Barbara.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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I was going to ask why the font is so very large, but I guess you wanted it that way. There is a white "box" behind your lettering; you can get rid of that by going to edit, then go to the box on the far right side next to the font color, I think it's background color. Anyway, you want "automatic", but highlight your text first. Then hit "save" and it should disappear.
It sounds like another "romcom" is off to the races. Did you say only two chapters for this in your first post? I can't imagine how you'd tie up the story in two, or maybe I misunderstood.
Thanks, Barbara.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Print is large because I had complaints, now I've had complaints about it being too large. I have made it a little smaller.
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Barbara, the next time someone complains that it is too small, tell them to hit the "ctrl" and + sign together, that will enlarge the print.
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I did but they continued to complain,
Comment from nomi338
I love it already. I am a bit intrigued by her statements about her father. Oh and by the way the large font is appreciated. I did not have a problem with the small print but must admit that the larger print is also very nice. I am anxious, not overly so, but eager nonetheless, to see where you are going to take us with these two individuals. After reading the character descriptions of the two main characters, I look forward to some fireworks and plot surprises.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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I love it already. I am a bit intrigued by her statements about her father. Oh and by the way the large font is appreciated. I did not have a problem with the small print but must admit that the larger print is also very nice. I am anxious, not overly so, but eager nonetheless, to see where you are going to take us with these two individuals. After reading the character descriptions of the two main characters, I look forward to some fireworks and plot surprises.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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Thank you for understanding.
