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Reminiscing

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A collection of short stories

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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I actually thought you were going to say how proud you were of Stephen for acknowledging your pregnancy and dissuading you from putting yourself at risk. Boys growing up are wonderful aren't they? They can be so prudish but, when it comes to it, I bet he would have done anything to defend you. Thanks for sharing, Barbara. Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


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Comment from Paul McFarland
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That was quite an experience, Barb. When I was young, about four or five, I witnessed an event between a father and child that will stay with me for the rest of my life.

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Comment from Begin Again
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Sometimes I think parents need a license to raise a child, especially the ones who go "overboard" and the ones who "don't even care." I would have been furious. I too got chills as I read the story.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


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Comment from BethShelby
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This is an excellent story. I can understand kids being embarrassed about their mom being pregnant. I can remember my kids not wanting to seen with me. They were embarrassed because there were four of them. Three were very near the same age but the last one was 10 years behind. I would have furious with the man for hitting the child too, but it wasn't unusual to see parents slapping their kids in public in the 50s.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


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    Probably very true, but this was 1992. Thank you for the support.
Comment from jim vecchio
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Thanks for sharing this memory with us. I had a daughter and tried to instill respect in her, and I would've done the some had I a boy. That memory would also have stuck with me.

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reply by jim vecchio on 04-Dec-2024
    Thank for memorable writing.
Comment from Jacob1395
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I can only imagine that that man must always feel miserable and must be like this all the time with their family and friends. You definitely did the right thing in this instance, Barbara. A well written piece.

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Comment from royowen
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I don't blame you for being angry, that poor kid, some fathers are the pits,
Especially dads that strike the face, that can cause immeasurable damage, I hate parent who swear at their kids in public, recreating themselves, some people need a licence to raise a kid, beautifully written Barbra, blessings Roy

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    Pleasure
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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There are parents that go too far and then there are the ones that definitely don't go far enough on the avenue of child discipline... and BOTH can ruin events for the rest of us. Sigh. Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette

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Comment from papa55mike
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I've seen some crazy coaching flag football. They had to ban some of the fathers for their conduct at the football field. It's only a game. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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OMG! I would be angry too! I hate parents like that, so brave hitting a small child. I would have smacked him around the face too. What is it with people like that? You have me all stirred up now! Greg was looking out for his mom, that was so nice. :)) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


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    Greg probably did the right thing, but this man deserved to be backhanded. Thank you for the support.