Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Roy, This is a very lovely and well written true poem. You used great descriptive words and great imagery with your words. Great scriptures also my friend. May God bless you! Teri

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Teri, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Teri7 on 14-Mar-2025

you are so welcome my friend! Blessings, Teri

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025

A pleasure

reply by Teri7 on 15-Mar-2025

😊😊😊

Comment from Angel Debbie

Exceptional

Amen, as the Bible would say, No One could ever say it any better than the Good Book- The Bible. This line just supersedes all others: I'd rather wear compassion's gown and on my head a kingly crown. Amen Brother. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Debbie, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

Beautiful poem about salvation! You take us from the dark of deception and sin into the life of redemption won by the Lord Jesus. Great job with the rhyming and meter!
One suggestion I would recommend:
and on my head a kingly crown. (grace-won crown)

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Helen, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

He hopes all of us come to the knowledge of Him and receive the saving grace offered. Jesus is a gentleman, and He forces no one. However, each person can believe and receive the marvelous gift He offers that only He can give. Beautiful poem of your testimony and the saving grace of God through our Lord Jesus Christ.
Sending you all my very best.
Sal Xoxo

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Sally, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Richard Frohm

Excellent

Roy,
Your writing is always a pleasure to read. You never let the reader down. Your writings always seem to carry a truly good meaning and easy for a reader to pick up on.

Richard

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Richard, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I think heaven will be different for all of us. I think our happy place will be our backdrop. People will come and go, just like in our everyday life, but no strife, no conflict. I do have an over active imagination. Beautifully written, Roy. Gretchen

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Gretchen, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you sharing this God inspired reminder that God is in charge and that our sins were paid for by Jesus dying on the cross. This is a beautiful poem and message.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Barbara, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Roy

It's 8 AM here I've been up since six. But your poem has got me wide awake, which is what good poetry does.

I like the whole thing. There isn't anything I could point out that's so much better than the others that got me mentioning it

Great job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Pam, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

A well written poem and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you a very wonderful day and I also wish you a very terrific week. May God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks Pat, for these super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from estory

Excellent

This poem takes us on that journey from lost and condemned to found and saved. The first line grabs the reader and pulls us in to this journey. I liked the steadiness of the tone of the voice here, and the marching rhythm that carries us forward. estory

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025

Thanks dear friend, for super comments, and a great review, blessings Roy