Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well I guess if we venture where not wanted or needed, we'll get what we deserve, rejection from the real world, by those who don't want us in our world, your sweat a lot Iza, well done, blessings Roy
Typo wanted to prove (a) loser.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025

Hello Mr. Roy, I guess you are right, it's a kind of don't play with the hornet nest

reply by royowen on 31-Jan-2025

Well done

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. It's very creative. Good luck with the contest.

I am pin to this stupid rock!" (pinned??)

"Well, you got your results freak! (results,)

Me dyeing was not part of the game when I agreed to get pin to the rock. (dying & pinned??)

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025

Hi Barbara, thank you so much for your precious input and corrections.