A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from Paul McFarland
Good start, Barb. I'm looking forward to this one. It will be interesting to see if the matchups turn out to be the ones that look obvious at this time.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Good start, Barb. I'm looking forward to this one. It will be interesting to see if the matchups turn out to be the ones that look obvious at this time.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you dropping by.
Comment from Karen Cherry
This is full of interesting tidbits. Lots of things can happen with this beginning. I look forward to the new novel. I am writing common sense for seniors again.
Karen
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This is full of interesting tidbits. Lots of things can happen with this beginning. I look forward to the new novel. I am writing common sense for seniors again.
Karen
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the support. I'm confused why I received three stars are this. Is it a mistake or could you tell me how to improve.
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That was done in error it has been corrected. I am so sorry.
:-( Karen
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Not a problem. It happens to me all the time.
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I don't know how it happened. I am sorry it caused up upset. Karen
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HUGS!!!!
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
I like the way you're setting the stage here, dropping tidbits here and there to pique our curiosity and sweeten that metaphoric pot of understanding the possibilities that lay in wait in the chapters to come.
So far, both Rebekah and Tyler seem like very nice people, though now we see Rebekah has some "secret facets" to her backstory! I'm definitely intrigued and all in.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I like the way you're setting the stage here, dropping tidbits here and there to pique our curiosity and sweeten that metaphoric pot of understanding the possibilities that lay in wait in the chapters to come.
So far, both Rebekah and Tyler seem like very nice people, though now we see Rebekah has some "secret facets" to her backstory! I'm definitely intrigued and all in.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. A lot information is still to come about Rebeka.
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Excellent!! xo
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I like your new book. I think Rebeka is your most old fashion heroine I have read so far. Dr Tyler sounds like a good catch... very respectful and caring... I guess it comes with the job.
Well done,
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Title: Serendipitous Meeting Chapter 2
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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I like your new book. I think Rebeka is your most old fashion heroine I have read so far. Dr Tyler sounds like a good catch... very respectful and caring... I guess it comes with the job.
Well done,
Check out....
Title: Serendipitous Meeting Chapter 2
TODAY'S POST
Chapter 1. (2)?
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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I sure will check that out. Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Rebeka is very old fashioned. I don't think you read Unspoken Traditions. Shana was very old school Jewish.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter part. You are developing your characters,nicely.
I want to keep reading. I do not see any room for improvement. Havena blessed day.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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This is another excellent chapter part. You are developing your characters,nicely.
I want to keep reading. I do not see any room for improvement. Havena blessed day.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
The doctor seems to be that mister right kind of guy, attentive, focused on the traumatized girl, not letting on to any attraction in the romantic sense. The girl seems to be letting him help her out; no indications of any attraction. One thing that struck me was how she tells Tyler that she was embezzled by someone she trusted. Not sure if people would be that forthcoming about things like that to strangers. I sure wouldn't be. estory
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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The doctor seems to be that mister right kind of guy, attentive, focused on the traumatized girl, not letting on to any attraction in the romantic sense. The girl seems to be letting him help her out; no indications of any attraction. One thing that struck me was how she tells Tyler that she was embezzled by someone she trusted. Not sure if people would be that forthcoming about things like that to strangers. I sure wouldn't be. estory
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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She's at a very low. I think she's needs somebody and feels he can be trusted a little. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Harry Craft
Interesting read Barbara. I truly enjoyed reading this. The photo with the dog is perfect for the scene with the dog shaking water everywhere too. It is a good read. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Interesting read Barbara. I truly enjoyed reading this. The photo with the dog is perfect for the scene with the dog shaking water everywhere too. It is a good read. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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I try to bring everyday life into my stories. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from themarfbard_michael
Just started reading this and I really enjoy it so far I was pulled right in from the beginning
You used great imagery as illiterate device, and I could picture the office everything from Tyler examining Rebecca to Zeke, shaking his water off in the office
You seem to be doing very well so far I'm not the greatest at prose reviewing, but I do know when literary devices make a poem or story better and what draws the reader in and you've done just that good luck on your future endeavors
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Just started reading this and I really enjoy it so far I was pulled right in from the beginning
You used great imagery as illiterate device, and I could picture the office everything from Tyler examining Rebecca to Zeke, shaking his water off in the office
You seem to be doing very well so far I'm not the greatest at prose reviewing, but I do know when literary devices make a poem or story better and what draws the reader in and you've done just that good luck on your future endeavors
Comment Written 11-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Wy Jung
My first read of yours here. Well done.
There are some formatting issues that took away from the reading of it, but overall the flow is there. I see that you are doing the work! Putting the words down on the page. Inspiring!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2025
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My first read of yours here. Well done.
There are some formatting issues that took away from the reading of it, but overall the flow is there. I see that you are doing the work! Putting the words down on the page. Inspiring!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2025
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I have no clue why the print changes. I normally post in basic. I may go back to it. I copied and pasted the entire post at the same time so it should all be the same. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent writing.
"Are you running from a job, a boyfriend or husband, or the law?" - Or bills, or the new government, or life? (smiley face here)
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2025
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Excellent writing.
"Are you running from a job, a boyfriend or husband, or the law?" - Or bills, or the new government, or life? (smiley face here)
Best wishes.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2025
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I should have added them. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
