General Poetry posted December 18, 2023 | Chapters: |
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Senryu Pair (for rules ck author notes)
A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Empty Nest
by Gypsy Blue Rose
![]() father helps son
move to his college dorm— sad to let go dad carries box with globe on his shoulder—
the weight of the world ![]() |
SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines.
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Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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