Hardship
An Acrostic- Loop Poem55 total reviews
Comment from sibhus
Seem deep thoughts on the reality of life. An experience that we all must bare and bare with the best of our ability. Sad, yet touching poem that was a joy to read. Thanks for sharing.
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Seem deep thoughts on the reality of life. An experience that we all must bare and bare with the best of our ability. Sad, yet touching poem that was a joy to read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
Comment from mauial
Interesting acrostic poem, starting the next line with the last word of the previous line. Love the clarity of thought throughout and the last line really clinched it for me.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Interesting acrostic poem, starting the next line with the last word of the previous line. Love the clarity of thought throughout and the last line really clinched it for me.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you so very much, yes I had ago at combing the Acrostic with the Loop form, glad you liked my effort, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from karenina
Kudos on melding an acrostic with loop poetry and making it work so that, in fact, hardship circles back to yet another version of hardship--regardless how hard we try to escape it! Best line? "Deflated by life that's inhaled by shadows." Wow. I must have stopped and re-read that single line a dozen times!--Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Kudos on melding an acrostic with loop poetry and making it work so that, in fact, hardship circles back to yet another version of hardship--regardless how hard we try to escape it! Best line? "Deflated by life that's inhaled by shadows." Wow. I must have stopped and re-read that single line a dozen times!--Karenina
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for these excellent comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You always have a special way with words...Karenina
Comment from Janet Foor
An excellent loop acrostic poem with a perfect piece of artwork to compliment your work.
Your vivid description of hardships and the struggles ring true.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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An excellent loop acrostic poem with a perfect piece of artwork to compliment your work.
Your vivid description of hardships and the struggles ring true.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your excellent comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Congratulations on being named one of the all time best and on being recognized. Your poem was a journey to hardship that I know very well. It flowed nicely. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Congratulations on being named one of the all time best and on being recognized. Your poem was a journey to hardship that I know very well. It flowed nicely. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from UpNorth
Oh, my- so well written to illustrate the inhalation and exhalation of life.Each line build on the last and curves back to the beginning . Like peeling an onion of truth.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Oh, my- so well written to illustrate the inhalation and exhalation of life.Each line build on the last and curves back to the beginning . Like peeling an onion of truth.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a very well written Loop Acrostic. I think you should have saved this one for a contest, you could have had your pick of two. Hardship has been with us for a long time now, and after this virus, it's not going to ease off at all, if anything, people will see greater changes in their lives and not for the better. Well done with this excellent poem. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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That was a very well written Loop Acrostic. I think you should have saved this one for a contest, you could have had your pick of two. Hardship has been with us for a long time now, and after this virus, it's not going to ease off at all, if anything, people will see greater changes in their lives and not for the better. Well done with this excellent poem. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, and yes I think many will see some hardship in the future, your comments and review are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Apt observations on hardship poignantly conveyed--startling imagery--time seems deflated--inhaled by shadows--not sure what that means but inventive nonetheless. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Apt observations on hardship poignantly conveyed--startling imagery--time seems deflated--inhaled by shadows--not sure what that means but inventive nonetheless. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you wrote a great poem about hardship. It gives a great description of the challenges of hardship. I like the line about Hope of a dream. Great poem!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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I think that you wrote a great poem about hardship. It gives a great description of the challenges of hardship. I like the line about Hope of a dream. Great poem!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Eternal Muse
A nice acrostic for "Hardship". You used great descriptive imagery to describe the word.
Shadows that darken one's clarity of hope
Hope of a dream, that's now buried inside
A very nice artistic presentation and photo to accompany.
Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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A nice acrostic for "Hardship". You used great descriptive imagery to describe the word.
Shadows that darken one's clarity of hope
Hope of a dream, that's now buried inside
A very nice artistic presentation and photo to accompany.
Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot