Tears
They are but the beginning...29 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
This was such a beautiful poem, Yvette. I can definitely understand the winning place in the contest. The imagery was perfect, as was the slightly hopeful, yet realistic tone.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2020
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This was such a beautiful poem, Yvette. I can definitely understand the winning place in the contest. The imagery was perfect, as was the slightly hopeful, yet realistic tone.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2020
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This is such a wonderful review, Chloe -- thank you so very much for those beautiful stars and your perfectly sunshiny smile to accompany them! ;) Yvette
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is one of THE BEST poems I've EVER read in my entire life!!!!! Your word choice is so... beautiful, and the topic you chose is also a GREAT topic!!! Congratulations for the win!!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar :)
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2020
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is one of THE BEST poems I've EVER read in my entire life!!!!! Your word choice is so... beautiful, and the topic you chose is also a GREAT topic!!! Congratulations for the win!!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar :)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2020
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This is such a wonderful review, Tanvi -- thank you so very much for those beautiful stars and your perfectly sunshiny attitude to accompany them! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I must give you a six star on this poem. Love the meaningful words that you wrote about tears, grieving pain. 'But they can wash away ashes on a scorched heart'. I hope that no one will ever get this close to a burning flame.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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I must give you a six star on this poem. Love the meaningful words that you wrote about tears, grieving pain. 'But they can wash away ashes on a scorched heart'. I hope that no one will ever get this close to a burning flame.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Wow - such a wonderful review, Rosemary! I am truly humbled. Thank you for both the lovely comments and the bright, shining stars! Enjoy the evening!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, such a beautiful poem, tears with healing powers that can wash away the scorched heart. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Wow, such a beautiful poem, tears with healing powers that can wash away the scorched heart. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I know personally that when I'm overwhelmed and I let the tears flow crying out to God, it releases my burden. I feel lighter and feel like I can go on. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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I know personally that when I'm overwhelmed and I let the tears flow crying out to God, it releases my burden. I feel lighter and feel like I can go on. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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You are so right, Jeffrey. Thank you for the review!
Comment from Sally Law
Well mystery poet, this was simply gorgeous! Similar to the Nonet which is my favorite. A fine offering and aptly illustrated. I'm in the oak tree mood lately. This appealed to me on every level.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest. A six for you today as well!
Sally :))
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Well mystery poet, this was simply gorgeous! Similar to the Nonet which is my favorite. A fine offering and aptly illustrated. I'm in the oak tree mood lately. This appealed to me on every level.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest. A six for you today as well!
Sally :))
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Such a wonderful review, Lady Sal - oak trees are beautiful even through there scars and mostly because of the way nature designs around them! Have cried until there's an empty well there for now... so it's time to start smiling again! Thank you for both the lovely comments and the bright, shining stars! Enjoy the evening, my lady!
Comment from ameen786
Awesome! Your poem is an absolute winner, I have no doubt; simple down to earth vocabulary so beautifully phrased in meaningful, poignant verses with superb alliteration; magic!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Awesome! Your poem is an absolute winner, I have no doubt; simple down to earth vocabulary so beautifully phrased in meaningful, poignant verses with superb alliteration; magic!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Wow - such a wonderful review, ameen! Thank you for both the lovely comments and the bright, shining stars! Enjoy the evening!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, how well I identify with the rawness of this beautiful poem. I am so very sorry that the author knows such grief, and it is evident that it IS known because the inexperienced could not write anything so astute otherwise, IMHO.
Good luck -- the best of luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Oh, how well I identify with the rawness of this beautiful poem. I am so very sorry that the author knows such grief, and it is evident that it IS known because the inexperienced could not write anything so astute otherwise, IMHO.
Good luck -- the best of luck!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Such a wonderful review, Dawn - your words and your smile are so very welcome. Have cried until there's an empty well there for now... so it's time to start smiling again! Thank you for both the lovely comments and the bright, shining stars! Enjoy the evening, my lady!
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Sending you a PM.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the Etheree Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. I like the presentation too. A relatable topic. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice entry for the Etheree Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. I like the presentation too. A relatable topic. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Lovely Etheree Poem - I admire your ability to write this style of poetry. It must have taken a lot of time to place each word in the correct place, so that it achieved the pyramid format.
But, style aside, let me say how much I was touched by the poem itself. I loved your reflection on tears, and what they accomplish. "...they can wash away love's ashes on a scorched heart" - this is beautiful, poetic writing.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Lovely Etheree Poem - I admire your ability to write this style of poetry. It must have taken a lot of time to place each word in the correct place, so that it achieved the pyramid format.
But, style aside, let me say how much I was touched by the poem itself. I loved your reflection on tears, and what they accomplish. "...they can wash away love's ashes on a scorched heart" - this is beautiful, poetic writing.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments... made my day over here! Take care!
