Shared Dreamscape
United both awake and beyond...12 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your diatelle is vividly descriptive and creatively composed. I can see why it won the contest! It is uplifting, conveying a powerful message about peace and dreams coming true.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Your diatelle is vividly descriptive and creatively composed. I can see why it won the contest! It is uplifting, conveying a powerful message about peace and dreams coming true.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Janice -- I've tried a few of these unusual ones during the holiday just cuz I've had the time... some of them, I think, are (as we used to say in the government world) above my paygrade, but I've enjoyed the challenges! ;) Hope you're having a wonderful start to your New Year and that it is filled with happy surprises as the months pass us by! ;) Yvette
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Shared Dreamscape", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good lick with the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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"Shared Dreamscape", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good lick with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Your comments are greatly appreciated, Duchess -- thank you!
Yvette,
You're very welcome,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is a beautiful poem. I really felt moved and in twined with in the words. Each breath and blink gives more power. This is so amazingly true. Happy New Year
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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This is a beautiful poem. I really felt moved and in twined with in the words. Each breath and blink gives more power. This is so amazingly true. Happy New Year
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Such a lovely review, Bobby Jo -- thank you!
Comment from RShipp
You seem to have followed the prescribed pattern required for this poem.
I think your "and petals plucked..." line was your best line.
The picture you chose for the poem was a good choice.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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You seem to have followed the prescribed pattern required for this poem.
I think your "and petals plucked..." line was your best line.
The picture you chose for the poem was a good choice.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2019
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Your thoughtful review is much appreciated. Happy New Year!
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author! Reading this reminds me of how inadequate I'm going to be coming back here... this is just lovely stuff. It's positively dreamy. Yes, pun intended... I know... bad. lol I really wish I had a 6 for you, it's definitely worth it! :)
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Hello Author! Reading this reminds me of how inadequate I'm going to be coming back here... this is just lovely stuff. It's positively dreamy. Yes, pun intended... I know... bad. lol I really wish I had a 6 for you, it's definitely worth it! :)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Lol! Glad you enjoyed, my lady! Happy 2020 up there!
Comment from May 1
First of all, I love the visuals of this poem. The poem itself is great and unique in its structure. One small thing that bothers me, and it's probably just me, is the color of the writing, it's a bit painful for my eyes. Anyway, just a silly suggestion on my part would be something a bit less strong. All in all the poem and the image are simply wonderful. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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First of all, I love the visuals of this poem. The poem itself is great and unique in its structure. One small thing that bothers me, and it's probably just me, is the color of the writing, it's a bit painful for my eyes. Anyway, just a silly suggestion on my part would be something a bit less strong. All in all the poem and the image are simply wonderful. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review....I will take a look at the colors when I get back to my desktop! Happy New Year!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Diatelle poem tells a nice message of humanity, united we stand and live, keeping faith in God, and we can live by sharing our dreamscape for survival in faith and love; well said, well done; visit my profile; thanks for sharing this, wishing you and everyone close to you a happy and healthy New Year 2020!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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This Diatelle poem tells a nice message of humanity, united we stand and live, keeping faith in God, and we can live by sharing our dreamscape for survival in faith and love; well said, well done; visit my profile; thanks for sharing this, wishing you and everyone close to you a happy and healthy New Year 2020!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Terry wrote
This is a very skillful piece of writing ... following the planned meter and rhyme scheme and yet keeping the focus on the developing theme. I cannot write in such a way, though years ago I could and did. Thanks for sharing this .. the image you chose certainly carries the theme well.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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This is a very skillful piece of writing ... following the planned meter and rhyme scheme and yet keeping the focus on the developing theme. I cannot write in such a way, though years ago I could and did. Thanks for sharing this .. the image you chose certainly carries the theme well.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thanks so much for your wonderful comments and meaningful review, Terry - much appreciated! Happy New Year!
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Nice example of a diatelle. The image chosen mirrors the fractured collage this type of poem lends itself to. The title, Shared Dreamscape, also seems to serve as a frame for this collage of word pictures.
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Nice example of a diatelle. The image chosen mirrors the fractured collage this type of poem lends itself to. The title, Shared Dreamscape, also seems to serve as a frame for this collage of word pictures.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. I have enjoyed reading this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. I have enjoyed reading this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thanks much for your review!
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You're welcome! :)
