Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

I am so angry right now! This simply can NOT be the end for dear Mildred. And it's so frustrating that Veronica has no voice! OY!! You've really made for quite the impossible situation! Got. To. Keep. Reading!!! xo

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019

LOL! You really are so funny, Rachelle, you always have me grinning like a Cheshire cat. :)) xxxx

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Sandra. Your book is very enjoyable and well thought out, although I haven't read every chapter. Your descriptions bring the reader right into it. I wish you the best in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2019

Hi Marilyn, thank you for reading this part, and your nice review. You already know the results, but thanks for the best wishes, my friend. :)) xx Sandra

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

oh my - suspense and plenty of it. Although I (obviously) can't follow the whole story - even your brief back story left me with questions. Understandable. But I get the gist of it. Great work of creating suspense and mystery too.
One paragraph stopped me - "now that I'd scared all the workers away with my 'chalk' antics" - For a bit I thought perhaps she'd murdered Mildred and didn't want to rescue her and that the workers would find her body when they came back to the ward.
Something about the smile and the satisfaction. Now that I finish reading, I see that she must have been smiling for some other reason.
I could follow your English terms well after half a lifetime of reading Catherine Cookson and other English writers. I can see this will continue being a great series as your character jumps around in the bodies of others. Good writing. I had a bit of trouble imagining how long this corridor was - why opening that particular door was the only way? and how many persons were in there to be rescued. Perhaps mentioning some of those facts would help the reader? Fascinating. And congrats on your new book released. congrats one coming in second.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2019

Thank you so much for jumping in at that point, and I'm even happier that you enjoyed it. It's a complicated story, but it's the third book in the series, I'll write a short synopsis and it on the next part. Thank you again, I really appreciated you reading this part. :)) Sandra xxx (Thanks for the congrats!!)

Comment from rwilliam

Exceptional

OH wow what an ending! Mildred! You have to be ok....

This was such an intense and yet funny chapter. I really like how she had enough and started pushing that person in a wheel chair. Too funny!

I look forward to catching up with your work. Good job, lady. ;))

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2019

Bless you, my dear friend, thank you so much for this wonderful review and all those stars! I love that you thought this was both funny and intense, that made my day! Biggest hugs, my friend! :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from wordsfromsue

Exceptional

Oh, come on!!
You can't leave Mildred to die... again!!!
She's not a cat, she doesn't have 9 lives!!

GET HER OUT OF THERE!!!

(That's an order!) :-)

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019

LOL! You are so funny, Sue! Right, guess I have no choice, since it's a direct order, I'll have to get her out of there! Thank you so much, my dear friend, for the six stars and the giggle! :)) Sandra xxxx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Just when I thought everything was going to be okay, you have me back on tenterhooks again! We all know Mildred will survive, but how are you going to save her?
I can't wait to find out.

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

Aw, thanks, Alexis, that is so nice of you. Your review and six stars have put a big smile on my face. Who says I'm going to save her???? LOL!! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

Very intense chapter. This is the first I have read of your story so I really don't know what's going on. I did not see any problems. Have a blessed weekend. Shirley

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

Thank you for reading this part, Shirley. Yes, it's quite a way into it now, so it would be hard to understand it. But, thanks for the review, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from TheStoryMan

Excellent

Oh poor Mildred! She needs medical attention! This is so scary! What about patient in the wheelchair? How is Veronica going to get them out? I hope that porter comes back!

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend. I'm glad you mentioned that last patient, I hadn't made it clear that the porter had taken them both. So, I've added this line....

     Without standing on ceremony, the man lifted the smaller lady out of her wheelchair and put her on the lap of the other.  He then turned and looked at Mildred with a concerned frown, but she nodded and flicked her hand. ?Go on then; I?m fine!?
 
Thank you a million times for that. You were the only one that noticed. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by TheStoryMan on 23-Feb-2019

You're welcome. I worry about all the characters...which means you've done a great job developing them and your story.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Exceptional

Oh this is very well written Sandra. Plenty of tension and apprehension. It is quite remarkable how you keep the reader on tender-hooks, wondering about the outcome. Again you come up with a dramatic ending, leaving us wondering what will become of Mildred. Very good read.

Haven't spoken for a while, will ring you tomorrow.

A worthy six - Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thank you so much, Dorothy, for another really lovely review and for giving me all those stars. Bless you! I had to try and get the tension right, as it would be in that situation. I'm so pleased you think I have. :)) Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

I'll be around all day, but have my stepson popping in around lunch time for an hour, but look forward to having another chat. I hope you have some good news, for me!!!

Comment from sandragee

Excellent

Veronica barely has time to savor her satisfaction in unlocking the door before another disaster befalls her. She will save the lives of many people by doing her door trick, but will Mildred be one of those saved?
This chapter has captured the panic and heroism that often happen in a crisis. Good job.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019

Thank you so much, Sandra, for another of your lovely reviews. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Will Mildred be saved? Next part coming on Sunday. :)) Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx