This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 " The Door"Third book in the time travel trilogy
35 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
You are killin' me here, Sandra! Worry...fear...hope...elation...disappointment. You've provided it all in this one!! Oy! Looks like it's another day of binge-reading your wonderful book. (You really should have won every single BoM! NO hyperbole! xo
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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You are killin' me here, Sandra! Worry...fear...hope...elation...disappointment. You've provided it all in this one!! Oy! Looks like it's another day of binge-reading your wonderful book. (You really should have won every single BoM! NO hyperbole! xo
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Tell that to Mastery, and he will send his henchmen out, :)) I think anyone who has to go begging for votes doesn't really have the confidence in his/her own writing. I was really pleased with all my regular reviewers, they were the ones who really counted. The fact that he put me down to you, and most likely others as well, goes to show his lack of confidence. Sad really. Now to get my books on the big screen!!!! LOL, wouldn't that be something?! I'm too old now to enjoy those things. I'm just over the moon that you are enjoying reading this book. :)) xxx
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Omigosh!! Wouldn't that be SOMETHING??!! Oy! You'd be my brush with greatness!!! I'd be SO first in line for tickets!! xo
Comment from giraffmang
You see, just when you think you've got things figured out... someone locks a bloody great door on you...
giving us a few days grace - days'.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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You see, just when you think you've got things figured out... someone locks a bloody great door on you...
giving us a few days grace - days'.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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LOL!! Now you're up-to-date, I'm posting the next part tonight. You're wonderful Gareth, thank you so much, I'll go and add the apostrophe. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Are you starting another story? I hope so. You did tell me you that hundreds in your head. :) xx
Comment from wordsfromsue
Hmm, I can't believe Veronica is going to let a little thing like a locked door stop her.... surely someone on the hospital staff has a skeleton key! Do you call them skeleton keys there? A key that opens any door.
Okay, I can't wait for the next chapter, so HURRY!!
;-)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Hmm, I can't believe Veronica is going to let a little thing like a locked door stop her.... surely someone on the hospital staff has a skeleton key! Do you call them skeleton keys there? A key that opens any door.
Okay, I can't wait for the next chapter, so HURRY!!
;-)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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No, of course she won't. I'm posting the next part tonight, so all will be revealed. Thanks again, you amazing lady for another 6!! So, now I owe you 4 hugs, 3 coffees, and two weeks bed at this amazing hotel! :)))) xxxx
Comment from alexisleech
Another great chapter, Sandra. Boy, do those girls have some problems to solve. Although I loved the chapters with James and the children, it was so nice to see Mildred and Veronica back together again.
Now for some action - I can't wait!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Another great chapter, Sandra. Boy, do those girls have some problems to solve. Although I loved the chapters with James and the children, it was so nice to see Mildred and Veronica back together again.
Now for some action - I can't wait!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 17-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, my dear friend. It was nice to reunite the girls, they are lost without each other. But, now they have some problems to sort out! Thanks for all those lovely stars, my friend. Biggest hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from lyenochka
Sorry - I haven't been keeping up with all that's been happening. I do like the way you describe the thinking process while Veronica is trying to figure out how to get back into the time.
Questions:
Could you give us the time period when they go back into time?
Does Mildred belong to the past time?
she whispered behind her hand. "Why?" (wasn't quite sure what this means. Was she covering her mouth?)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Sorry - I haven't been keeping up with all that's been happening. I do like the way you describe the thinking process while Veronica is trying to figure out how to get back into the time.
Questions:
Could you give us the time period when they go back into time?
Does Mildred belong to the past time?
she whispered behind her hand. "Why?" (wasn't quite sure what this means. Was she covering her mouth?)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Hi, thank you for reading this part, but I'm sorry, but it would be silly to keep telling everyone what period she is in when she goes back because they know from so many other chapters exactly where they are. Just mentioning Mildred, or the hospital tells the reader Veronica has been taken back into WW1 rather than 1905 with the suffragettes. The reader would also know that Mildred whispered behind her hand, (doesn't that mean the same thing as 'covering her mouth?) because no one else could see Veronica and it would look as if she is talking to herself which is shown by her actions in this part when Veronica is at last sent back. This is the 3rd book in the series so everyone already knows what's happening. Mildred, in fact, is also a time traveller, but neither can just go where they want, they are sent to different times by the Powers to stop changers that would totally alter the future. It's not a complicated story, but the questions you've asked would probably annoy readers if I was to keep putting in the time era they already knew from part one and all the subsequent actions in previous chapters. Sandra.
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Oh, I didn't mean adding it to the text. Just where you have the list of characters in the notes, you could also mention the time period just for the occasional reviewers. Thanks!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An excellent chapter that brings Ver.
and Mildred back together in time and place.
-Ver. is definitely industrious and
finds plans for the hospital.
-They become pivotal to what
she and Mildred find.
-I love Mildred's comment to the group
about practicing for a West End play!
-After the plans had been followed accurately,
and they found the door, it was to no
avail since it was locked.
-Things are not easy; it reminds me of
those movies when the clock is ticking
away the seconds before disaster.
-Hopefully, there won't be one.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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-An excellent chapter that brings Ver.
and Mildred back together in time and place.
-Ver. is definitely industrious and
finds plans for the hospital.
-They become pivotal to what
she and Mildred find.
-I love Mildred's comment to the group
about practicing for a West End play!
-After the plans had been followed accurately,
and they found the door, it was to no
avail since it was locked.
-Things are not easy; it reminds me of
those movies when the clock is ticking
away the seconds before disaster.
-Hopefully, there won't be one.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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I'm so pleased you liked the West End play part. My image of Mildred has always been of a fun, kindhearted and very honest woman. She might come across a bit dotty at times, but underneath she is very wise and right on the ball. She's going to need her wits about her in future parts.:))
Thank you so much for all those stars, Pam, and for another one of your really lovely reviews. I liked the way you described how it reminded you of the clock ticking, and you're right, they haven't got long to sort things out. Big hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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I think you capture the spirit of Mildred very well with your description. I see her that way, too. The West End was priceless!
"Oh, Lordy, am I going to be in play, now, Miss Sandra?! I am gettin' pretty good at my actin' skills, now. Jes' sayin'!"
You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review. I am glad you liked my analogy!
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LOL! If it came to it, I'd insist you played the part of Mildred! You know her so well. :)))
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I'll be Mildred, and you can be Veronica. Mildred would need some of Veronica's wisdom and guidance; although, it works the other way, too! We'd have to get some male leads-only good men need apply!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
Well done.
Of course, there has to be a way out and what better way than a door.
A hidden door, in a basemen, but then the door is locked, as it should be.
I think there must be a key or another door.
It's good to have Mildred back. After all, what's Holmes without Watson
or Eric without Herbie?
Nicely done on all counts.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Hello Sandra,
Well done.
Of course, there has to be a way out and what better way than a door.
A hidden door, in a basemen, but then the door is locked, as it should be.
I think there must be a key or another door.
It's good to have Mildred back. After all, what's Holmes without Watson
or Eric without Herbie?
Nicely done on all counts.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the lovely 6 stars, Robert. Yes, you're right, Veronica without Mildred just wouldn't be right. They have forged such a friendship, they are lost without each other. I'm glad you enjoyed this part, thank you for the lovely review. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from sandragee
Believing the bombing is over, Mildred learns there is more to come, and the hospital will take a direct hit. She pales, takes a moment to absorb the news, and then says, "We's got t' get all the patients outta here."
When a metal rack may be blocking a door, unperturbed, she clears the shelves. The door is locked, but I don't see that as being a problem for Mildred. She is a very determined woman.
Mildred is a great character. She is a person that everybody wants for a friend.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Believing the bombing is over, Mildred learns there is more to come, and the hospital will take a direct hit. She pales, takes a moment to absorb the news, and then says, "We's got t' get all the patients outta here."
When a metal rack may be blocking a door, unperturbed, she clears the shelves. The door is locked, but I don't see that as being a problem for Mildred. She is a very determined woman.
Mildred is a great character. She is a person that everybody wants for a friend.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Mildred was only a secondary character when this series started, but she grew so much she almost has her own fan club on here! lol. Thank you so much, Sandra, for this lovely review. Mildred has a lot to do now. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Bichon
Oh, I found this to be very interesting! I haven't read the previous parts, but I was still drawn right in. Mildred seems like an interesting character who I want to learn more about, great job!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Oh, I found this to be very interesting! I haven't read the previous parts, but I was still drawn right in. Mildred seems like an interesting character who I want to learn more about, great job!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I think Mildred has her own fan club on here, lol. Thank you so much, Bichon, for this lovely review. It's nice to know my story was interesting enough to bring you into it. I hope you come back again! Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Sandra,
Oftentimes, I read your well-crafted writing, but I have not the time to review. So know for a certainty that I have been following your writing, and I am an avid fan! This chapter was very engaging; I loved it. Oh to be a time traveler! How exciting that would be.
I loved the word, "juddered." That's a new one to me and it made me smile!
Thank you for sharing
diane
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Hello Sandra,
Oftentimes, I read your well-crafted writing, but I have not the time to review. So know for a certainty that I have been following your writing, and I am an avid fan! This chapter was very engaging; I loved it. Oh to be a time traveler! How exciting that would be.
I loved the word, "juddered." That's a new one to me and it made me smile!
Thank you for sharing
diane
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Diane! What a lovely surprise. I'm so pleased you have been reading my story, and enjoyed it, too! I'd love to hear more of your thoughts on how it's progressing and of any input you might have. It's just so nice to read of different perspectives. Warm hugs, Sandra xx