This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "The Answer"Third book in the time travel trilogy
33 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This novel has now crossed over from 'excellent' to 'gripping.' On I go to read yet another chapter. Don't worry! There's still many hours before Bobby returns home, expecting dinner!! xo
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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This novel has now crossed over from 'excellent' to 'gripping.' On I go to read yet another chapter. Don't worry! There's still many hours before Bobby returns home, expecting dinner!! xo
Comment Written 24-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Are you having salad for dinner??? That's the quickest!! Lol! Lots more xxx and a big hug! xxxx
Comment from dragonpoet
It seems that there are no answers in this chapters. Or the answers just bring more questions. It would be sad if her time travel really changed history so much that it wiped out her family.
Congratulations of placing second in the contest.
Happy Holidays and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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It seems that there are no answers in this chapters. Or the answers just bring more questions. It would be sad if her time travel really changed history so much that it wiped out her family.
Congratulations of placing second in the contest.
Happy Holidays and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018
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No, but the information from James' grandfather's letters, has put Veronica on the right track. :)) Thank you so much for reading this part, Joan and for the congrats. It's lovely to see that people on here have been enjoying the story. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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No problem, Sandra.
Joan
Comment from Gert sherwood
Congratulations sandramitchel for coming in second for the new Book of the Month. I agree I will be waiting for the next chapter Gert
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Congratulations sandramitchel for coming in second for the new Book of the Month. I agree I will be waiting for the next chapter Gert
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much, Gert! I was really pleased to know voters thought my book was worth their vote. :)) Thank you for the congrats, my dear friend. Big hugs, and have a wonderful Sunday! :)) xxx Sandra
Comment from wordsfromsue
WHAT THE HECK?!
I think I get what happened here.... still...
What an incredible twist of history and storyline you've come up with here, Sandra!
This was a REALLY good chapter...kept me glued to my chair. :-)
I have no idea how Veronica is going to remedy this.
Poor Mildred, having to work so hard.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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WHAT THE HECK?!
I think I get what happened here.... still...
What an incredible twist of history and storyline you've come up with here, Sandra!
This was a REALLY good chapter...kept me glued to my chair. :-)
I have no idea how Veronica is going to remedy this.
Poor Mildred, having to work so hard.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Aw, thank you, Sue. That is such a lovely review, and I'm so pleased you liked this part. Thank you for another lot of pretty stars, my dear friend!! Love you lots! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is another great chapter in your story, Sandra. I enjoyed reading it. Things are falling into place for me as you write each chapter. I am understanding where this part of Veronica's travel is leading too. You have described it well. I like the way you included Veronica's inner thoughts. Your storyline flows well and leads nicely to the upcoming chapter. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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This is another great chapter in your story, Sandra. I enjoyed reading it. Things are falling into place for me as you write each chapter. I am understanding where this part of Veronica's travel is leading too. You have described it well. I like the way you included Veronica's inner thoughts. Your storyline flows well and leads nicely to the upcoming chapter. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Jan, your review is so nice. I'm just sorry you have missed the payout. The next part is on line, well half of it, it was too long to put it all on, so I'm going to post the other half on Sunday. Thank you again, my friend. I really appreciate your kind review. :)) Sandra xx
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No worries about the payout. I enjoyed reading it and I want to keep up. I have that next part to review soon.
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Thanks, Jan. :) xx
Comment from Lady Jane
"Oh(,) Miss Veronica,"
Oh, no...something's not right in this alternate universe, Sandra :) Well, well...the plot is seriously thickening. Factory workers, no James, and they didn't win the war(S), hmmm...I'm thinking the powers that be are playing a sick joke on poor Veronica...and all whist she's donned a tiny nightie :) Excellent writing with strong dialogue and meticulous imagery. Im truly enjoying this book. Until next installment, dear :)
Janelle
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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"Oh(,) Miss Veronica,"
Oh, no...something's not right in this alternate universe, Sandra :) Well, well...the plot is seriously thickening. Factory workers, no James, and they didn't win the war(S), hmmm...I'm thinking the powers that be are playing a sick joke on poor Veronica...and all whist she's donned a tiny nightie :) Excellent writing with strong dialogue and meticulous imagery. Im truly enjoying this book. Until next installment, dear :)
Janelle
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much for another one of your lovely reviews,Janelle. Things are starting to turn, and Veronica has lots to find out now. The next part has just been posted, well half of it, the other half will be posted on Sunday. :)) Thanks for your continued support my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I am glad to see Ver. and Mildred together,
Sandra, but it is certainly under
mysterious circumstances.
-It is like they are both in the same time
physically, but not in the sense that Ver. thinks.
-Somehow, things got changed when they
time travelled, and now even history is out of sync.
-You have done a great job in re-working history;
I have trouble keeping up with the real events!
-You show the frustration of Ver. when she snaps
at Mildred, something she would normally never do.
-She also shows her love for her, and tries to
reassure her that she does have a pension.
-But Mildred sees a different time; no pension,
needing to work in a factory, and
no knowledge of winning any wars.
-I think the Powers are needed to get
this all straightened out.
-What they have done, and how
they are going to fix it will be interesting.
-It seems like a daunting task for Ver. on her own.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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-I am glad to see Ver. and Mildred together,
Sandra, but it is certainly under
mysterious circumstances.
-It is like they are both in the same time
physically, but not in the sense that Ver. thinks.
-Somehow, things got changed when they
time travelled, and now even history is out of sync.
-You have done a great job in re-working history;
I have trouble keeping up with the real events!
-You show the frustration of Ver. when she snaps
at Mildred, something she would normally never do.
-She also shows her love for her, and tries to
reassure her that she does have a pension.
-But Mildred sees a different time; no pension,
needing to work in a factory, and
no knowledge of winning any wars.
-I think the Powers are needed to get
this all straightened out.
-What they have done, and how
they are going to fix it will be interesting.
-It seems like a daunting task for Ver. on her own.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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What a brilliant review, Pam, you really have got it right. Veronica has her work cut out for her trying to sort this little lot out. There is a lot more to discover, and with Mildred there with her, she will feel a lot happier. I've posted half of the next chapter, and will finish that on Sunday. Lots to do.. Thank you so much for the lovely shiny stars. Big hugs my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the review and stars, Sandra. I am glad I got it right. I went out on a limb and decided to make a definite prediction! Ver. and Mildred have always been a great team, along with James, when he is there🙂
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
It's about time... and consequences, and meddling
It will all become clear in time...
As a "time fan" I enjoyed this chapter,
plus the return to the original characters
that I think have gotten a little lost.
One must be very careful with the past
it's like an old china shop, no bulls allowed
even a flea can change the world
Well done, my friend
Robert
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Hello Sandra,
It's about time... and consequences, and meddling
It will all become clear in time...
As a "time fan" I enjoyed this chapter,
plus the return to the original characters
that I think have gotten a little lost.
One must be very careful with the past
it's like an old china shop, no bulls allowed
even a flea can change the world
Well done, my friend
Robert
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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LOL, how much did it take to write this fabulous review putting all those times in it?? LOL It took me some time to count the times, but being a time traveller myself, in the end it didn't really take much time! :)))
Thank you so much for another of your hilarious reviews, Robert. You are right, just one change can do so much damage to the time-line. And something has gone seriously wrong. Sending you a hug for the lovely sixer, my friend, thank you!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from tfawcus
Now things are becoming complicated! Veronica isn't the only one that is a bit confused. No doubt it will all become clear in time. I do enjoy the dialogue between Veronica and Mildred and the tantalising hints you include to help us work things out. Another great chapter.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Now things are becoming complicated! Veronica isn't the only one that is a bit confused. No doubt it will all become clear in time. I do enjoy the dialogue between Veronica and Mildred and the tantalising hints you include to help us work things out. Another great chapter.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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It will all become clear soon, Tony! (I hope) Veronica has to learn a bit more and then.... :)) Thank you so very much for the lovey 6 stars, my friend, and the wonderful review. Big hugs! :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Zue65
Oh my I am getting dizzy and crazy too. Veronica will find it really hard to explain to Mildred everything. But I guess it's up to writer to untangle the knotted events. The next post is worth the wait.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Oh my I am getting dizzy and crazy too. Veronica will find it really hard to explain to Mildred everything. But I guess it's up to writer to untangle the knotted events. The next post is worth the wait.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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LOL, you and the rest of the reviewers, but, all will become clear in another couple or so parts. Thank you so much, Susan, for your continued support and lovely review. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx