Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Nice job with your cinquain, Kahpot. You're really getting into writing all these new forms and that is terrific.

Another fine write from your quill and many thanks for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Exceptional

Kahpot: stars for Jesus. I like your cinquain and witnessing
to the world. We do need to open our hearts and believe
in our King. Our life is meant to share love. Well done.
flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018

Wow! thank you very much, what a wonderful review****kahpot

Comment from Gaiana

Excellent

This is fabulous! Such a powerful message. Loved how you created the rhyming words in Lines 3 and 5. And your visual image was stunning - really enhanced the overall experience.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you for your excellent review****kahpot

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

Wow...this is your first. I say, Bravo. I'm too wordy to even think about trying to say something so true, as you did, in such a few words. Thank you for your author notes as well, because I never would have guessed it. Bravo!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank for your very encouraging review****kahpot

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem, short and to the point. Where would the world be if God did not sacrifice his son for us. I love the picture included. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much ****kahpot

reply by Boogienights on 02-Jul-2018

Comment from phill doran

Excellent

Hello Anon
Very, very well written. It is very difficult with a 'faith-based' poem to bring something new to the thoughts of the reader. But here, in a very compact and confining form, you have managed to share something of you and ask something of me.
This is very good. It is gentle, compassionate and both sensitive and direct, which is not a contradiction in this case.
I wish you the very best in your contest and with your writing.
cheers
phill

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you for your excellent and encouraging review****kahpot

Comment from Beto1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading the concise poem. Through the image above, I can truly see the omniscient and benevolent role God plays in people's lives. I also liked the message of sharing his love to others. It creates a sense of communal warmth and trust. Good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much for this very encouraging review****kahpot

Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hey Kahpot, another excellent post. The Cinquain in its very brevity is powerful. Yours is direct with a strong statement of faith.

Well done, met all requirements for the Cinquain. Thanks for posting!

Lynn

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much for your very encouraging review****kahpot

Comment from The Death

Excellent

It's a lovely poem! I liked the wonderful message you deliver. It's all about spreading love and being kind. One can easily relate to your thoughts. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank for your encouraging and understanding review****kahpot

Comment from Yemima Kebede1

Excellent

Great job! It's nice to see you again in this great poem that you have written. I really love the line-- "who gave me love". Best of luck to you. Have a blessed week!

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018

Thank you very much, you are very encouraging reviewer****kahpot