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Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Hold Me Near"Song lyrics with music attached
10 total reviews
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem for the song lyrics contest. This should do very well in the contest good luck to you. I wish you all the best. I love the flow of us and the rhyming throughout. It's very smooth. Thank you for sharing this. God bless you. With love la
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Hello friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem for the song lyrics contest. This should do very well in the contest good luck to you. I wish you all the best. I love the flow of us and the rhyming throughout. It's very smooth. Thank you for sharing this. God bless you. With love la
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your sad, love song lyrics and your emotional repeats. The "ring of smoke" metaphor intensifies your message of loneliness and helplessness. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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I admired your sad, love song lyrics and your emotional repeats. The "ring of smoke" metaphor intensifies your message of loneliness and helplessness. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
This is clearly song lyrics. I can hear it already. The lyrics are simple but well put and not common in the least. I cannot wait to hear the music with this. Good luck, a couple other entries are strong, but this is best so far.... NG
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This is clearly song lyrics. I can hear it already. The lyrics are simple but well put and not common in the least. I cannot wait to hear the music with this. Good luck, a couple other entries are strong, but this is best so far.... NG
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a very good song. It is the only one I've seen so far that breaks down the chorus and verses. The hook is very good and repetitive, as a hook should be.
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This is a very good song. It is the only one I've seen so far that breaks down the chorus and verses. The hook is very good and repetitive, as a hook should be.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
Comment from Charmisa Parker
This is so beautiful. I can imagine this as song, and it can be become a hit lol because of the message it talks about, loneliness. I think we as humans get so quickly attached to others because of it.
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This is so beautiful. I can imagine this as song, and it can be become a hit lol because of the message it talks about, loneliness. I think we as humans get so quickly attached to others because of it.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written song you have penned for the contest. You used very good heartfelt descriptive wording and imagery from your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very well written song you have penned for the contest. You used very good heartfelt descriptive wording and imagery from your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
Comment from c_lucas
It is hard to discover
The meaning of a fart
between lovers
and the slamming of the door
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Forgive the humor. I write for humor and sometimes my work is a little risque. You are a very skillful poet/song writer. Keep up the good work.
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It is hard to discover
The meaning of a fart
between lovers
and the slamming of the door
***
Forgive the humor. I write for humor and sometimes my work is a little risque. You are a very skillful poet/song writer. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your entry in the 'Lyrics make the Song' contest. Your lyrics are very nice and certainly tell the tale of wishing for someone to 'Hold Me Near.'
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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thank you for sharing your entry in the 'Lyrics make the Song' contest. Your lyrics are very nice and certainly tell the tale of wishing for someone to 'Hold Me Near.'
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Very well-written song lyrics, definitely one of the very best I have seen his far. We all need someone to hold us near, and we can sing this song for the one we really need to hold close to us.
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Very well-written song lyrics, definitely one of the very best I have seen his far. We all need someone to hold us near, and we can sing this song for the one we really need to hold close to us.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
Comment from Hamiel
hold me near and shield me from the night...congratulation. It is well written and felt therein the sentiments. Wish you goodluck and more way to opportunity for this song lyrics of yours. I like it.
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hold me near and shield me from the night...congratulation. It is well written and felt therein the sentiments. Wish you goodluck and more way to opportunity for this song lyrics of yours. I like it.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017