Songs
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "A Loss For Words"Song lyrics with music attached
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Comment from Gloria ....
This is really terrific Mav. I like the ethereal sound you've created on the keyboard and the arrangement from minor to major keys makes for a mixture of yearning and pleasure, I guess is the word I'm looking for. It's really good and with some production and bringing the vocals right up and clearly into the foreground I'd say you have a hit love song. Is there any way to separate tracks on your recording equipment?
Couple of typos:
there just words (they're)
just here me play (hear)
Love this lyric and music. :))
Ange
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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This is really terrific Mav. I like the ethereal sound you've created on the keyboard and the arrangement from minor to major keys makes for a mixture of yearning and pleasure, I guess is the word I'm looking for. It's really good and with some production and bringing the vocals right up and clearly into the foreground I'd say you have a hit love song. Is there any way to separate tracks on your recording equipment?
Couple of typos:
there just words (they're)
just here me play (hear)
Love this lyric and music. :))
Ange
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Wow. I'm totally jazzed you liked this although I'd rather you'd heard a slick multi-track version instead. Of course, no one has seen fit to put me in a studio for some unknown reason. LOL
Fixed the typos, gracias
You're just the sweetest and too generous, but I'm smiling. Thanks so much.
Mav
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Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello there friend I really enjoyed reading these song lyrics that you have composed here and a sweet poem I think that this will be a very nice song If you complete it thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Hello there friend I really enjoyed reading these song lyrics that you have composed here and a sweet poem I think that this will be a very nice song If you complete it thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thanks so much, what lovely words. Actually the song is attached in the author's notes although it's a rather noisy thrown together version. :)) mike
Comment from Kerry Foley
Hey, Mikey this is a fantastic song, my friend. You truley did a wonderful job on this. I loved that you added in the music and words to hear the melody. You could relly have a hit hit here, with another singer of course, lol, NOT an insult, my friend. Great skills you have, Oh I believe on the last line,
"don't go away
just here me play" It sounded like you sung don't go "far" away.
Just thought I'd let you know, so you can add it to the words. or whatever it is how you wanted it. either is terrific. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Hey, Mikey this is a fantastic song, my friend. You truley did a wonderful job on this. I loved that you added in the music and words to hear the melody. You could relly have a hit hit here, with another singer of course, lol, NOT an insult, my friend. Great skills you have, Oh I believe on the last line,
"don't go away
just here me play" It sounded like you sung don't go "far" away.
Just thought I'd let you know, so you can add it to the words. or whatever it is how you wanted it. either is terrific. ~Kerry
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Aww, you're too sweet. Thanks so much. Yeah, this is kind of rough. It's called a "scratch vocal" when the author records it. It's just to show how it goes really. I'd think someone YOUNG would work. HAAAAHAHA!!!!! Glad you liked it. :)) mike
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Thanks Mike, I didn't think you were trying to cut the record yourself, lol I know it's for us to hear it, never heard the term scratch vocal-I learn something new everyday. :))