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Comment from
dragonpoet
This sounds like a drunken one night stand from a male point of view. It sounds like this guy has some ego to think this will be a night worth remembering in any way but as a mistake by the woman.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
Yep, exactly what it sounds like. LOL
Kind of a raucous rock n roll thing. I doubt anyone would REALLY get away with it uninjured. LOL
Just for fun. :)) mike
reply by dragonpoet on 16-Jun-2017
I guessed it was all in fun. Yep the sex drugs and rock n roll ideas of earlier years.
Joan
Comment from
kiwigirl2821
Hi Michael. This lil write makes a reader sweat. How cool is it to find the one where this is the new reality. I can tell you one thing, if a man says something like this to this reader, I pay attention. lol. Great stuff here. Music cool too. Congrats xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
You make me smile AND hopeful. LOL
What a great reaction. Thanks a million. mike
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