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Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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These lyrics are DEEP.
My favorite part: 'I take a razor blade and I bring on red
I search for meaning in what you said'
The artwork supports the song. The background goes well with the image and color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017

Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hello Mr. Cahill. I think I got the overall gist of this but I'm not sure I understood the viewpoint. It seems that the folks involved in the write are male who is doing his own cutting to bleed like his wife. But, I'm totally lost in the overall meaning. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017