Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

This is an amazing lyric, Mav. It's tone of aloneness that is wistful is not wholly sad because the song is still being sung. And the juggler of course alludes to keeping a lot of objects in the air and accomplishing what seems really to be impossible.

I really love this one and not noisy at all. :)) Excellent artwork too.

Ange

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017

Thanks, Ange.

You're too generous as always. You have the gist of it perfectly. This is an unworked on piece really, so I'm pleased you thought it was okay. Maybe one day I'll learn how to actually record properly ... not likely though. LOL Mav

Comment from sunao

Excellent

This poem made my eyes spin around in circles in my mind. It truly depicts what you are expressing in the song lyrics. Thank you so much for expressing yourself on here. Please keep up the good work and have a beautiful day.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017

Wow. That's some really nice words to hear. A big smile. Thanks a million, mike

reply by sunao on 10-Jun-2017

You're so welcome!

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

This is a very sad and lonely juggler's song, and it is very gripping in
each phrase. May be a personal lament about getting older and lonelier,
or maybe a song to a long lost love one could not win, and kept singing
the same lonely song. Either way, the emotions and feelings expressed
are truly haunting. Great write, provocative message within. Do hope
you keep writing more. Thanks for sharing...
Best wishes, Ronni

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017

Mostly a lost love though I like the getting older aspect you mentioned. A great take and interpretation also.
Wonderful uplifting review. Yes, you are so encouraging, I shall write more. :)) mike