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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Follow the Road"Song lyrics with music attached
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi (*>*)
= Oh, heck!
= Following that rode with an ex---Hell on earth, and indeed, leaves one adrift on the seas.
= Been there ... it sucks.
= Nice to be back, but will be here and there in limited time-frames.
= I'm still editing to publish.
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Hi (*>*)
= Oh, heck!
= Following that rode with an ex---Hell on earth, and indeed, leaves one adrift on the seas.
= Been there ... it sucks.
= Nice to be back, but will be here and there in limited time-frames.
= I'm still editing to publish.
= I will happily review those who follow me, but because of limited time-frame, will not be able to review ALL of each person posts.
= => LATEST PUBLISHING <= =
= 1 = Heartfelt II - Heart and Soul (Poetry)
= 2 = Dare To Dream (Book 1 of 'The Allister Saga)
= 3 = Lethal Deception (Contemporary Novel)
= => TO BE RELEASED in a few days <= =
= 4 = Maybe Someday (Book II of Allister Saga)
Cheers ... Jax (*>*)
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading and trying to sing, I think you've written a great piece.
It's just right for children.
The image shown supports the song. The background selected goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
I think this would have made a good contest entry.
Thanks for sharing your song lyrics.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
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After reading and trying to sing, I think you've written a great piece.
It's just right for children.
The image shown supports the song. The background selected goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
I think this would have made a good contest entry.
Thanks for sharing your song lyrics.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017
Comment from Curly Girly
This poem talks about a freedom of a sort. The freedom to follow the road that unites with other roads and ends in a muddle but never really ends. The journey is continuous.
Look for a ship
adrift on the sea;
then, use the wind as a guide.
Away, away, away somewhere--
follow, follow the road.
One stays behind, the other keeps following the road in front.
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This poem talks about a freedom of a sort. The freedom to follow the road that unites with other roads and ends in a muddle but never really ends. The journey is continuous.
Look for a ship
adrift on the sea;
then, use the wind as a guide.
Away, away, away somewhere--
follow, follow the road.
One stays behind, the other keeps following the road in front.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017