Shining
She is my guiding light in life storms11 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
What a lovely tribute to someone special. She is the calming presence, and the guiding star. So pretty, a wonderful entry in this contest. Blessings...
reply by the author on 25-May-2017
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What a lovely tribute to someone special. She is the calming presence, and the guiding star. So pretty, a wonderful entry in this contest. Blessings...
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 25-May-2017
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Thank you for the read and your comments. I can always use blessings.
Comment from angel123
I like your beautiful artwork choice. It enhances your poem. It flows well and your message is interesting and well written.
angel123
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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I like your beautiful artwork choice. It enhances your poem. It flows well and your message is interesting and well written.
angel123
Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comment.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good contest entry. I hope you do well. Wait a minute. I entered this contest. Your entry sucks. I hope you crash and burn.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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A very good contest entry. I hope you do well. Wait a minute. I entered this contest. Your entry sucks. I hope you crash and burn.
Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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May your thoughts be cast back upon you. Thanks for the read, enjoyed your humor.
Comment from Thal1959
Very nicely composed - given the restrictions on the maximum word count. Reads short, but sweet. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Very nicely composed - given the restrictions on the maximum word count. Reads short, but sweet. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading this, I find it to be a good poem.
It consists of three lines with a word count: 5-4-4
Total word count: 13
I can clearly see that this poem meets the requirements of the contest. Therefore, I think 'Shining' would make a good entry.
Nice artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Short Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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After reading this, I find it to be a good poem.
It consists of three lines with a word count: 5-4-4
Total word count: 13
I can clearly see that this poem meets the requirements of the contest. Therefore, I think 'Shining' would make a good entry.
Nice artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Short Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for the thoughtful read and the comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written short poem. At night we look up to the skies and the stars. When the moon shines through the rolling clouds it seems our evening is perfect.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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A very well-written short poem. At night we look up to the skies and the stars. When the moon shines through the rolling clouds it seems our evening is perfect.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from Pquack
Wow, so much impact in such few words! Love this and it plainly says it all. I can only hope that my husband could say that about me. How wonderful a testament to the stability and peace that a true love can bring. Wonderfu!
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Wow, so much impact in such few words! Love this and it plainly says it all. I can only hope that my husband could say that about me. How wonderful a testament to the stability and peace that a true love can bring. Wonderfu!
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments. I'm sure you shine in your husband's eyes.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine short poem that meets the requirement of the contest
Good descriptive imagery and use of alliteration
and a nice contrast set up in line three
Excellent art work to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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This is a fine short poem that meets the requirement of the contest
Good descriptive imagery and use of alliteration
and a nice contrast set up in line three
Excellent art work to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from mvbrooks
The ominous sky in the picture with only a glimpse of light from a star sets the mood for the words that seems to acknowledge what a difference one person made in lighting the narrator's darkened path.
Just a thought -- the first line seems awkward without a "was" to set the timeline of "before" and "after." It would not cause the word count to go over.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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The ominous sky in the picture with only a glimpse of light from a star sets the mood for the words that seems to acknowledge what a difference one person made in lighting the narrator's darkened path.
Just a thought -- the first line seems awkward without a "was" to set the timeline of "before" and "after." It would not cause the word count to go over.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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I thought about using was, but then I liked it better without it. Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your entry in the Short poem contest. Within these few lines, you've described how one person can make all the difference. Your presentation works well - 'shining like a bright star in the night.'
~patty~
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reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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thank you for sharing your entry in the Short poem contest. Within these few lines, you've described how one person can make all the difference. Your presentation works well - 'shining like a bright star in the night.'
~patty~
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 23-May-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments.