Grabbing God's attention.
Fine tuning the static.14 total reviews
Comment from Lovinia
Congratulations DALLAS, what a heart-warming poem and great wit. Lovely image. Your poem is a worthy winner, I'm so pleased for you. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
Congratulations DALLAS, what a heart-warming poem and great wit. Lovely image. Your poem is a worthy winner, I'm so pleased for you. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Thanks bunches, Lovinia. Aways great to hear from you. Have you taken any classes lately?
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I'm pleased your wit and expression was appreciated at the booths. I always think of our classes together when I see you post. We did have fun. Not able to do any for a while now, my ninety year old mother needs my company more and more, real life intervenes with the pleasure of FS. How are you? I hope all is well in your neck of the woods. Are you taking any classes? Huge hugs - Lovi xoxo
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Thanks, Lovinia.
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No classes for quite a while. Thinking about taking one in the fall. Maybe one on short story writing.
Comment from pharp
Congratulations on your win in this contest. Excellent job in the penning of this six word poem. Outstanding presentation and very true statement regarding the power of prayer. Blessings..............Pharp
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Congratulations on your win in this contest. Excellent job in the penning of this six word poem. Outstanding presentation and very true statement regarding the power of prayer. Blessings..............Pharp
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you . Haven't even checked it out yet.
Comment from Bobbi22
Sweet sentiments added to the perfect artwork for your six-word poem. Prayer, no matter how soft or loud, still reaches its destination. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Sweet sentiments added to the perfect artwork for your six-word poem. Prayer, no matter how soft or loud, still reaches its destination. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Lovely poem got the point across with only six well chosen words. So sweet and true. Good choice of artwork. Thank you for writing and sharing. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Lovely poem got the point across with only six well chosen words. So sweet and true. Good choice of artwork. Thank you for writing and sharing. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you for reviewing.
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You're welcome
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, yes, I can see this being a true statement for those who believe. A prayer would be seen as being instantly heard by God. Nice entry.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Hmm, yes, I can see this being a true statement for those who believe. A prayer would be seen as being instantly heard by God. Nice entry.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yes, prayers can and often do break not only sound barriers, but the chains of ALL barriers that weigh down our souls.
This is pretty profound for such a short poem.
Nice work.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Yes, prayers can and often do break not only sound barriers, but the chains of ALL barriers that weigh down our souls.
This is pretty profound for such a short poem.
Nice work.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thanks for the kind review.
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Sure thing.
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Bollie
This is an incredibly beautiful poem. The way that you described in poetic form that a whisper comes from a very loud and powerful voice when spoken in prayer is very profound and creative. This is a really great poem. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
This is an incredibly beautiful poem. The way that you described in poetic form that a whisper comes from a very loud and powerful voice when spoken in prayer is very profound and creative. This is a really great poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thanks for the awesome review.
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You're very welcome, Dallas.
Have a wonderful night.
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You're very welcome, Dallas.
Have a wonderful night.
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You're very welcome, Dallas.
Have a wonderful night.
Comment from Aqua2021
Wow, this is a really touching poem. Its really perfect, I don't have anything to say other than this is really good. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Wow, this is a really touching poem. Its really perfect, I don't have anything to say other than this is really good. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, this is incredible. I can't believe you have managed to incorporate so much power into a six word poem - how imaginative, to think that a prayer whispered could be so loud! I love this - in fact, I think it's the best I've read - for sure it's the most appealing to me. I don't often visit the voting booth unless I have an entry, but if the sites rules allow it, I'd sure like a heads up when the voting starts. I'll try to watch for this contest anyway.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
Wow, this is incredible. I can't believe you have managed to incorporate so much power into a six word poem - how imaginative, to think that a prayer whispered could be so loud! I love this - in fact, I think it's the best I've read - for sure it's the most appealing to me. I don't often visit the voting booth unless I have an entry, but if the sites rules allow it, I'd sure like a heads up when the voting starts. I'll try to watch for this contest anyway.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Thanks, Dawn. Looks like it was a win.
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Congratulations! It was a well-deserved one, IMHO. :))
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And hey - the competition for this one was STIFF!
Comment from RoostyNester
What a beautiful poem! How deep the meaning of your poem, and how touching it is! If only we could go before God as this child. To see how that nothing will keep a child's prayer from him! Very good! Loved it!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
What a beautiful poem! How deep the meaning of your poem, and how touching it is! If only we could go before God as this child. To see how that nothing will keep a child's prayer from him! Very good! Loved it!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016
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Thank you for the great review and the bonus star.