Picky, Picky
just for fun 5-7-515 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 fun poem and an excellent photo to compliment your poem. A special photo is taken and the oldest one decide it's time to pick her nose, the disgust of the younger one is written all over his little face. Hahaha
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
A very well-written 5-7-5 fun poem and an excellent photo to compliment your poem. A special photo is taken and the oldest one decide it's time to pick her nose, the disgust of the younger one is written all over his little face. Hahaha
Comment Written 14-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
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Glad you got a laugh from this 'just for fun' poem and photo. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
Comment from kathleenspalding
Hahaha!!! (And...ew! Lol!) Very funny five seven five gets the point across using very few words. Incredibly appropriate and hilarious artwork. Thanks for the laugh and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
Hahaha!!! (And...ew! Lol!) Very funny five seven five gets the point across using very few words. Incredibly appropriate and hilarious artwork. Thanks for the laugh and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
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Glad you got a laugh from this 'just for fun' poem and photo. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ginger Banks
Cute, this is a great picture, and goes with the poem in several different ways, a unique and funny sense of humor! I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
Cute, this is a great picture, and goes with the poem in several different ways, a unique and funny sense of humor! I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this 'just for fun' poem and picture. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Kazzawin
Funny, funny : )
I'm not surprised romance is on the wane here . . .yuk!!
Very funny short poem with a rather unique subject which made me smile.
You have used the wording of the prompt well. Good luck : )
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
Funny, funny : )
I'm not surprised romance is on the wane here . . .yuk!!
Very funny short poem with a rather unique subject which made me smile.
You have used the wording of the prompt well. Good luck : )
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
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Happy this poem made you smile. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from foxangie123
Clever and really a god one. His cute and clever is this. Bravo. I hope that you will write more for us competition or not. This is fun.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
Clever and really a god one. His cute and clever is this. Bravo. I hope that you will write more for us competition or not. This is fun.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this 'just for fun' poem. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
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Hugs
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is so cute and you found the best artwork to go with it! Love it...wish you best of luck in contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
This is so cute and you found the best artwork to go with it! Love it...wish you best of luck in contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this 'just for fun' poem and the photo. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Picky Picky, reminds me of so many nose=picker jokes. My brother was teased constantly by our sister, you know the one, who would get in his face and say, "We're going to make a booger sandwich and feed it to you!"
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
This 5-7-5, Picky Picky, reminds me of so many nose=picker jokes. My brother was teased constantly by our sister, you know the one, who would get in his face and say, "We're going to make a booger sandwich and feed it to you!"
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
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Happy you could relate to this 'just for fun' poem. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, This is a funny poem. You did a good job with the syllable count and that is important for a 5/7/5 poem. The presentation is cute and easy to read. Good job!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
Hello, This is a funny poem. You did a good job with the syllable count and that is important for a 5/7/5 poem. The presentation is cute and easy to read. Good job!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this poem and presentation. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o)
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for the fun 5-7-5 contest
Good use of rhymes
and a topic some can relate to very well
Good picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
This is a fine entry for the fun 5-7-5 contest
Good use of rhymes
and a topic some can relate to very well
Good picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
Comment from lfemine
Haha! That's one of the best of these short poems I've seen. Very funny and light-hearted. Well-written, great rhythm to the lines. Awesome and hilarious picture you chose! I'll bet he gave up on THAT romance :)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
Haha! That's one of the best of these short poems I've seen. Very funny and light-hearted. Well-written, great rhythm to the lines. Awesome and hilarious picture you chose! I'll bet he gave up on THAT romance :)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
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Yep - he gave up on THAT romance. Thanks for the wonderful review, and I'm thrilled with the special rating! So glad you enjoyed this poem and funny picture. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)