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Picky, Picky

just for fun 5-7-5

15 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 fun poem and an excellent photo to compliment your poem. A special photo is taken and the oldest one decide it's time to pick her nose, the disgust of the younger one is written all over his little face. Hahaha

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Glad you got a laugh from this 'just for fun' poem and photo. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
Comment from kathleenspalding
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Hahaha!!! (And...ew! Lol!) Very funny five seven five gets the point across using very few words. Incredibly appropriate and hilarious artwork. Thanks for the laugh and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Glad you got a laugh from this 'just for fun' poem and photo. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
reply by kathleenspalding on 14-Jun-2016
    You're welcome.
Comment from Ginger Banks
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Cute, this is a great picture, and goes with the poem in several different ways, a unique and funny sense of humor! I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this 'just for fun' poem and picture. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
reply by Ginger Banks on 15-Jun-2016
    You're welcome.
Comment from Kazzawin
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Funny, funny : )

I'm not surprised romance is on the wane here . . .yuk!!

Very funny short poem with a rather unique subject which made me smile.

You have used the wording of the prompt well. Good luck : )

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Happy this poem made you smile. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from foxangie123
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Clever and really a god one. His cute and clever is this. Bravo. I hope that you will write more for us competition or not. This is fun.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this 'just for fun' poem. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
reply by foxangie123 on 14-Jun-2016
    Hugs
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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This is so cute and you found the best artwork to go with it! Love it...wish you best of luck in contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this 'just for fun' poem and the photo. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Picky Picky, reminds me of so many nose=picker jokes. My brother was teased constantly by our sister, you know the one, who would get in his face and say, "We're going to make a booger sandwich and feed it to you!"

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Happy you could relate to this 'just for fun' poem. Appreciate your thoughts. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, This is a funny poem. You did a good job with the syllable count and that is important for a 5/7/5 poem. The presentation is cute and easy to read. Good job!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this poem and presentation. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o)
Comment from rspoet
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This is a fine entry for the fun 5-7-5 contest
Good use of rhymes
and a topic some can relate to very well
Good picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;o)
Comment from lfemine
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Haha! That's one of the best of these short poems I've seen. Very funny and light-hearted. Well-written, great rhythm to the lines. Awesome and hilarious picture you chose! I'll bet he gave up on THAT romance :)

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
    Yep - he gave up on THAT romance. Thanks for the wonderful review, and I'm thrilled with the special rating! So glad you enjoyed this poem and funny picture. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)