Reviews from

Christine's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Handy Man"
Poems /stories on Fanstory

11 total reviews 
Comment from I am Cat
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Oh Christine, your husband's workshop looks a lot like my husband's as well. LOL
Handy, yes, OCD? Definitely LOL
A place for everything and everything in its place!
Well done, and i smiled all the way through this!
Loved it.

one question:

In draws? or drawers?
(Is this a cultural divide thing? ;)

Love it
Cat


 Comment Written 24-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
    Hi Cat, so glad I have you on this site and thanks for highlighting my draws and yes it should be drawers, but it is probably my accent we say draws but mean drawers. I have corrected this so thanks heaps, yes a place for everything, weeeellllll most of the time.it can look like a dogs breakfast sometimes, but eventually sorts it out. Glad you had a smile. I am a bit behind so will catch up soon. Cheers again Christine
Comment from MacMhuirich
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Oooo, that's a lot of tools - I'd have difficulty trying to remember where everything is and my wife hates waiting on me handing her the right tool :)
Every home should have a handy man, me? I live in the same house, that is as handy as I get. Wonderful poem to read, good fun and thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2016
    Hi John, Many thanks for reading my poem and yes my husband has quite a collection, but wait there's more LOL. He is very handy and in that I am quite lucky. I can see you have a handy wife LOL . A bit of fun to write Glad you enjoyed this Have a lovely day my friend Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Mark Valentine
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A great poem that hits close to home. I too love my tools - though my wife will tell you that my do-it-yourself projects rarely come in under budget. You capture the spirit of the do-it-yourselfer very well here - I especially like the lines "and if he thinks he needs some more, he'll go down to his favorite store" - how true!

A great poem - I'll have to go back and find RObyn's poem that inspired this.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
    Hi Mark, couldn't resist the challenge from Robyn, so This kept me busy for an hour or two LOL, Oh Yes 'Bunnings' is Gregs favourite store, he has a weekly visit LOL. Glad you liked this one Cheers Christine.😀
Comment from William Ross
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

very good, very well written loaded with good rhyming and a wonderful read. witty and fun. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
    Hi William, Thanks again for reading my poem and I had fun with this one ( Do read Robyns poem too) I like a challenge LOL have a great day Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi Christine - this is a great poem. I have one of those - I could not bear to have any other. LOL A handy man is essential as something is always going wrong in my house. The picture - my handyman (hubby) would be envious of that workshop. Your poem tells the story with an easy flow and the rhyme is perfect. An enjoyable read. Warm regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
    Hi Dorothy, warm regards for your review of my handyman, yes he isn't too bad around the house and He enjoys my projects LOL , had a bit od fun with this one Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi, Christine

= This is an excellent poem about hubby in his workshop.
= I believe you met the challenge very well.
= This was a fun read, my friend.
= So pleased to see you posting again.

* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*>*)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
    Hi Jackie, Thanks for a look at this one too. Robyn's poem made me laugh and I just couldn't resist. Yes still here writing as often as I can Love it and always smiling Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Kaydoe
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A fun poem about your husband workshop and all his tools. You also get a feel of the language when he is frustrated. This is well crafted and enjoyable to read.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
    Hi Kaydoe, Yes a little light hearted post re my husband and his workshop, spurned on through a post by Robyn Corcum 'Whatcha building,Lemme help' a funny poem and worth a read. Thanks for reading and reviewing my effort also Many Cheers Christine😀
Comment from pharp
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi Christine,

This is a really nice and cute poem; a most enjoyable and fun read. As I was reading it reminded me of my husband the handyman. He is always fixing something, loosing screw and swearing.

Excellent rhyming and meter, very smooth flow and a fun read. Thanks for sharing. Blessings.........................Portia

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
    Hi Portia, so mice to jear from you, and I am glad you liked this and can identify with these words. A light hearted one this time. Many Cheers to you Christine😃
Comment from Jeffers63
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

thanks for this fun piece and the ODE to the handy man. I really enjoyed the way you have described his love for his shed. I get a sense that you may be Aussie? but sorry if I am wrong. I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Regards
Jeffers63

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
    Hi Jerffers63. Yes an Aussie I am with an Aussie bloke who is quite a good handy man, and I often have a 'project for him' LOL, With all the money spent on the tools he may as well use them efficiently. Thanks for reading and reviewing my post Cheers Christine😃
Comment from Marykelly
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a fun poem about a wife singing the praises of her husband, handyman, who has plenty of tools, gadgets, and stuff but may not be that handy after all. The Form is quatrains and the metric movement makes the words flow. The rhyme also moves the pace along in a conversational way. well done

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
    Hi Mary, And thank you for reading my poem and for your great review I do have a pretty good handy man, but sometimes things go a little skewwiff LOL. I had fun writing this Cheers Christine😃