Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Haha, I'll say this is nonsensical. Limericks are fun to write and if you enjoy doing it, why don't you try some that make sense? Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016

It required a last minute change, I hadn't seen the line about writer's block.

The original read,

Oh rickety snickety snitch
My girlfriend?s a card carrying witch
She pours me her potions
Says their length?ning lotions
Now my crotch goes ickety itch

Had I not paid my entry fee, I would have cancelled out
Thanks

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

oh I'm cackling now... ;)
this is funny... what do you care as long as she rubs it in?
I mean, really? lol

this is great... one suggestion...
the second line, I think the meter might run more smoothly if you said:

my girlfriend's a card carrying witch

THe only problem with this is the contest is supposed to be about:

Write a Limerick about writer's block (please keep it clean). It must start with
'Oh rickety snickety sn...'

so i"m not sure how this is about writer's block?

good luck in fixing it before the contest. ;)

(wish I could help... I'm on my way to bed and out of town early morning, sorry!) :(
Cat

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016

I just saw the line about 'writer's block. About to make the change. Thanks for the second line suggestion, I'll do that now.

reply by I am Cat on 31-Jan-2016

You're welcome, good luck!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I've always enjoyed a ribald limerick and this one made me chuckle.
Your choice of rhymes were spot-on.
The humor comes from knowing his "old girl" is a card-carrying witch whose potions may or may not work.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thanks for the great review. This really was a fun write and I'm so glad you enjoyed it

Comment from AnnieDawn

Excellent

I like this entry too. I have read a couple and you all have done well with this contest. I am impressed, especially, with your choice of subject. I like a good chuckle and yours gave me one for sure. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thank you Annie. I'm glad you enjoyed my piece of nonsense

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

LOL - not sure this meets the contest guideline but it sure is funny one - true to the ingrained bawdy nature of most limeiricks and very creative. I can picture you now....Oh wait, I really don't want to go there LOL

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thank you Douglas. I saw this contest and these lines just occurred to me. Guess that says something about my warped brain. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad it provided a laugh.

Comment from Jeffers63

Excellent

thank you for this fun poem that made me smile the form is great and the words are really great together. Good luck in the contest.

Regards
Jeffers63

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thank Jeffers. It was my first thought of seeing this contest. I hope no one takes offence at my warped sense of humor