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Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Hideaway"Song lyrics with music attached
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Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, this is the Stallion I see in my dreams sometimes at night...have sense I was a little girl...he has been with me through time...see him in my past...and I see him in my future...for I believe if we ever jump all the way over the hurdle I will die...we have never totally clear it...I rode a lot growing up...I love your poem...video just a bit hard to understand...but I enjoy hearing your voice...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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HI Michael, this is the Stallion I see in my dreams sometimes at night...have sense I was a little girl...he has been with me through time...see him in my past...and I see him in my future...for I believe if we ever jump all the way over the hurdle I will die...we have never totally clear it...I rode a lot growing up...I love your poem...video just a bit hard to understand...but I enjoy hearing your voice...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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I used to ride too. I actually took lessons when my family decided I was going to be a STAR! I fooled them. Ha! Loved the horseback riding lessons though.
Yeah, youtube requires a video, so the best I can do is throw some pictures together, sometimes just one picture. I imagine it doesn't make much sense!! Just put on a blindfold and listen. :))
Thank you so much. mikey
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LMAO, I think I can deal with the pictures....I took western and English riding lessons...but not to be a star...LOL...your so welcome Michael...xxoo luff
Comment from Neonewman
Awesome! The audio was a bit hard to make out! It certainly could be this old computer of mine. Great Lyrics Mikey, love the guitar and the voice.
God bless!
Steve
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Awesome! The audio was a bit hard to make out! It certainly could be this old computer of mine. Great Lyrics Mikey, love the guitar and the voice.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Oh no, it isn't your computer. The quality of the recording is BAD, but it's all I have at the moment. So pleased you were still able to enjoy. Thank you kindly, mikey
Hope you have an awesome New Year!!
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I certainly did enjoy and just listen to the one would you steal. Love the lyrics, the voice and the guitar. You are quite the multi talented individual young man!
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I certainly did enjoy and just listen to the one would you steal. Love the lyrics, the voice and the guitar. You are quite the multi talented individual young man!
Comment from doggymad
Hi there
hope you have survived the crazy season. I am just popping by to wish you a New Year.
Will be back reviewing properly after 1st January
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Hi there
hope you have survived the crazy season. I am just popping by to wish you a New Year.
Will be back reviewing properly after 1st January
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Hi, my friend. It's always crazy season for me!!
Hope you have the greatest New Year. Perhaps I'll try some proper reviewing myself. Ha!
See ya soon. Hugs back, mikey
Comment from mbagby23
Interesting, yet there are people who really feel like that. Which makes it sad at the same time. No need to hideaway loving ourselves starts and will bring one out of hiding.
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Interesting, yet there are people who really feel like that. Which makes it sad at the same time. No need to hideaway loving ourselves starts and will bring one out of hiding.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Interesting take on this. I like your insights, very thought provoking. mikey
Comment from krys123
Mikey;
-I really enjoyed your writing very much as it showed a deep emotional bond of a person who rides to get away or more likely to hide away.
- the pictures very appropriate, relative and complementary to your poem and as a failing in tone to the concept of your writing.
- trying to listen to the music in the still pictures in the musical author's notes a little choppy and hard to listen to.
- I enjoyed the palmers very artistically inclined and had a very ominous feel to it.
- thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Mikey;
-I really enjoyed your writing very much as it showed a deep emotional bond of a person who rides to get away or more likely to hide away.
- the pictures very appropriate, relative and complementary to your poem and as a failing in tone to the concept of your writing.
- trying to listen to the music in the still pictures in the musical author's notes a little choppy and hard to listen to.
- I enjoyed the palmers very artistically inclined and had a very ominous feel to it.
- thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Hi Alex.
Just getting these things on record somewhere. Pleased you liked the lyric and concept. I'm working on improving the recording aspect. Hopefully, that will improve. Thanks as always for detailed, insightful review. Blessings, mikey
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You are so welcome my friend and may you and yours have a very happy new year.
Alex
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
wow where is the rest.
Oh, there has to be more than just this. you have hit on something more.
Nicely done and very well worded to get the imagination going
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wow where is the rest.
Oh, there has to be more than just this. you have hit on something more.
Nicely done and very well worded to get the imagination going
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I do think I have more somewhere, but this is what's handy. :))
Thank you kindly, mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
Yes, I love this too. The music really enhances the lric and brings it to life. The words stand on their own, but they soar with the music. You post em, I review em ... it is the way of things.
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Yes, I love this too. The music really enhances the lric and brings it to life. The words stand on their own, but they soar with the music. You post em, I review em ... it is the way of things.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I'm pleased you like the lyric/music mix. What a great compliment!!! Thank you, mikey
Comment from teols2016
Good stuff. The music in the clip was a bit blaring and overpowered the lyrics at times. Nevertheless the song has potencial. Good job.
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Good stuff. The music in the clip was a bit blaring and overpowered the lyrics at times. Nevertheless the song has potencial. Good job.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Yes, sorry about the sound quality. It's all I have at the moment. Pleased you see potential for it. Thank you, mikey
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I love the story you are portraying and the artwork to go with it. Horses are one of my favorite animals so you had me from the start. Good work.
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Excellent. I love the story you are portraying and the artwork to go with it. Horses are one of my favorite animals so you had me from the start. Good work.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Horses are way cool. Thank you so much. I'm encouraged that you enjoyed this. mikey
Comment from nancyrabbrose
I especially like "I ride a black stallion through the night...and her eyes are the only light I remember:. Excellent.
You have written a profound poem. Good for you!
please check the spelling on remember; delete the first "b".
On Fanstory I treasure the fact that I can read a concept put in a new way, such as you have done.
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I especially like "I ride a black stallion through the night...and her eyes are the only light I remember:. Excellent.
You have written a profound poem. Good for you!
please check the spelling on remember; delete the first "b".
On Fanstory I treasure the fact that I can read a concept put in a new way, such as you have done.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Ooops, thanks for pointing that out ... fixed. :))
I'm thrilled with your response and pleased you singled that line out. Yes!
You are so right, this is a great place!! Mikey