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Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Would You Steal"Song lyrics with music attached
15 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
I not only would steal to feel my children but have. I am not proud but how could anyone not do what ever they have to to fee their children. I love the recording and I do hope you get to record it professionally one day. Great work work for this one. So sorry I have been remiss in my reviews do to my recuperation from my broken ribs. Hopefully by the end of January I will be back to my regular self and able to keep up with proper reviewing.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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I not only would steal to feel my children but have. I am not proud but how could anyone not do what ever they have to to fee their children. I love the recording and I do hope you get to record it professionally one day. Great work work for this one. So sorry I have been remiss in my reviews do to my recuperation from my broken ribs. Hopefully by the end of January I will be back to my regular self and able to keep up with proper reviewing.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Hi. So nice to hear from you. No worries about reviews. I'm the worst in Fanstory history at reviewing and responding, so I understand. :))
I found a few of the responses a bit odd. I think it would be a given that one would do anything to feed their kids. I'm delighted you liked the music, I'm not quite as confident about that as I am the lyrics. So very encouraging. Perhaps I'll get a chance in a studio. At the very least I'm trying to get a little bit better equipment so I can make a less noisy offering. :)) Keep healing! No one's going anywhere. mikey
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, yes!!! I would steal to feed my kids...and most likely do worse if I had to...like this man...I would face the consequences...so very well written sweet boy...and a great songs...love this you...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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HI Michael, yes!!! I would steal to feed my kids...and most likely do worse if I had to...like this man...I would face the consequences...so very well written sweet boy...and a great songs...love this you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Yay! I'm pleased you enjoyed. Thank you so much Queen of Sweetness. :)) mikey
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you are so sweet...and you are so welcome...always...Linda xxoo luff
Comment from Neonewman
Yes Mikey, I would certainly steal if it came down to it. Luckily I have enough family who would help me through it. I love the lyrics and absolutely love your style singing. You have an awesome voice my friend. I did not know this.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Yes Mikey, I would certainly steal if it came down to it. Luckily I have enough family who would help me through it. I love the lyrics and absolutely love your style singing. You have an awesome voice my friend. I did not know this.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Yeah, I'd steal to to feed a kid if I had to. Glad you liked this. Wow. What do I do with all the praise? So appreciated. Maybe I'll make a comeback in music. :))
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It is never too late Mikey! May all your dreams come true in 2016 and may your nightmares transform into epic novels.
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It is never too late Mikey! May all your dreams come true in 2016 and may your nightmares transform into epic novels.
Comment from mbagby23
When it comes to one child they just might. We know that it is wrong, but I rather steal the food than have to look at the eyes of my children and say I am unable to give us a meal.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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When it comes to one child they just might. We know that it is wrong, but I rather steal the food than have to look at the eyes of my children and say I am unable to give us a meal.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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I agree. I think you've stated it right on the money. Thanks for the insights. mikey
Comment from pattipac
Mikey, your poem about a father stealing food for his hungry family, and his death at the hands of the King's men, who are blessed to live within the King's garden, and have never known hungry sends a powerful message to all who would read and learn.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Mikey, your poem about a father stealing food for his hungry family, and his death at the hands of the King's men, who are blessed to live within the King's garden, and have never known hungry sends a powerful message to all who would read and learn.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Hi! I hope you had a beautiful Christmas. :))
You have this sooooo totally on the money and the way I hoped it would be received. What a great review and amazing glittery galaxy of stars!!! Thank you so much, mikey
Hope your New Year is the BEST!!!
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Thanks, Mikey. Wishing you a blessed New Year filled with health, happiness, and writing ideas.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Well, dear friend, very well stated and quite a combination of past and present.
Nicely done in the way it was presented and worded.
sad but oh so real in this day and age.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Well, dear friend, very well stated and quite a combination of past and present.
Nicely done in the way it was presented and worded.
sad but oh so real in this day and age.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Hi. Thanks so much. I'm glad we see eye to eye. :))))
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Great lyrics for a country song. I don't think I will be able to steal, not even to feed my kids. There is always a plan to make to feed the kids. On the other hand I never experienced such a dire situation.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Great lyrics for a country song. I don't think I will be able to steal, not even to feed my kids. There is always a plan to make to feed the kids. On the other hand I never experienced such a dire situation.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Circumstance does play a huge role I think. Pleased you enjoyed and thank you for your insights. Mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
I know you told me dont bother reviewing. Well, this is toooooo good to pass by. This is one of your best IMO.
I dont know how you managed to make a song out of this, but I guess I shouldnt be surprised.
I love everything about this. I wish I Was rich, I would put you in a studio just for my own amusement.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I know you told me dont bother reviewing. Well, this is toooooo good to pass by. This is one of your best IMO.
I dont know how you managed to make a song out of this, but I guess I shouldnt be surprised.
I love everything about this. I wish I Was rich, I would put you in a studio just for my own amusement.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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You are too kind. I'm just trying to get this stuff in a folder so I don't lose it. I am delighted by your response. It's difficult to listen to such a poor quality recording I know. I'll cross my fingers that you get rich. :)) mikey
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This is a very well written poem. It points out clearly the desperation of the starving. I love the ending even if it is rather sad. I could find no errors in this. Good job
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Excellent. This is a very well written poem. It points out clearly the desperation of the starving. I love the ending even if it is rather sad. I could find no errors in this. Good job
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Wow. Thank you so much. mikey
Comment from nancyrabbrose
I think that is a profound poem. Well done. Very thought provoking. It reminds me of the book, Sounder, when the father stole a ham for his starving family and had to endure the consequences. Yes, that is a very good question to ask. I especially like "what makes you think the air is just for you?". Wow. Very good.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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I think that is a profound poem. Well done. Very thought provoking. It reminds me of the book, Sounder, when the father stole a ham for his starving family and had to endure the consequences. Yes, that is a very good question to ask. I especially like "what makes you think the air is just for you?". Wow. Very good.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015
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Wow. I'm so encouraged and pleased by your response. Just what I wanted to hear. You've made my day. :))
Thank you so much and for all the stars too! Mikey