Comment from ellie6

Excellent

A well thought out haiku. the illustration is perfect for the rest of the poem .I loved that last line, it's truly inspirational. This one must come high on my list.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings..................Portia

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

So many kinds of sunset, each one tells its own story. It is a majestic sight, and like a stage show. Well chosen words and great picture. Good luck in the contest. faye

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks so much my friend for your review, kind comments and best wishes. Blessings.............................

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)
Nice haiku, good job adhering to all the contest rules- syllable count, two interconnected lines, a kigo, and satori. Good job!
~gypsy

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments................................Blessings

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This has a very apt satori as it refers to a sunset: "grand finale. The haiku is appropriately and prettily illustrated. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings.............................

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a nicely composed entry in this sunset haiku contest. Along with the most apt artwork to embellish this worthy entry in the contes, well done, good luck with this entry, blessings, Roy,

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings.........................

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hello..i very much enjoyed the many meanings this has..the multi dimensional outlook for me has to do with appreciating what the entire day has bÅ?ought..the lessons learned that brightened me up..one last moment..sunset..to reflect this day in a flash...cheers my friend.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings..............................

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi mystery author,this is a really good entry for this particular competition, Your well chosen words and the excellent artwork should see this Haiku do really well, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks so much my friend for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings...............................

reply by Eric1 on 18-Sep-2015

You are so welcome my friend.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I love the second line on this. the matinee performance to end all performances. I think it should be its debut instead of it's debut. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes. Thanks also for bringing the error to my attention. Blessings............................................

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Sunsets especially over water are magnificent, therefore you satori is more of a statement or summary rather than an 'aha'. Good imagery in the first 2 lines.
Teresa

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015

Thanks so much for your very kind and honest review. I have changed the third line and pray I have delivered that "aha". I appreciate your review. Blessings.............................

reply by TAB_that's me on 17-Sep-2015

I like it