Comment from OLA THOMAS

Excellent

Doctor Howler's Nightmares read and sound great. A well thought out chapter done with accurate sense of creativity and instinct. You gave graphical details that lead the readers on in the story.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015

Thank you for your comments and support.

Comment from Jackreese

Excellent

Talk about food poisoning.. I loved every twisted, maniacal and disturbed part of the story. Kinda reminded me a bit of Creep Show and the Father's Day cake with the head on a platter. It was very entertaining well done and most definitely worth the read.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thank you for your very kind words. Always appreciate your comments and support.

Comment from Annette Gulliver

Excellent

Hi Brett.
Your spooky artwork caught my eye. I thought it was going to be a ghost story. But, wow, what a way to get revenge on somebody. The mean old judge served up on a platter. I hope there were plenty of vomit bags on hand at the end of the main course.
Very well written, and definitely full of horror.
cheers
Annette

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. Enjoyed writing that one very much.

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

So, the coroner gave you the body. That was a ten-thousand dollar meal. Would the poison have gone into the judge's tissues? If so maybe all of the guests would keel over, too.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015

$10,000 nothing to pay for the revenge. Glad you enjoyed this little story.

Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Excellent

Hello good friend. I take note of anyone who uses my artwork and usually try to come by to say "Hello", and to check out your work. Thanks for using it and my best to you in your work. Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015

Your artwork has been used on several of my pieces and I will continue, with your permission, to use more of it too. Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Appreciate your comments, support, and the use of your artwork as well.

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 07-Aug-2015

Hi Brett
You are welcome. I also have many written works here on Fanstory.com, when you have time, please take a look. Thanks!
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

I think this was a good story of sweet revenge. It is well written and I bet a few were not feeling so well after all that meat and learning where it came from.
Only a couple of things: The sentence that reads Not the first time I had fed a Dog and Pony Show of this caliber before. I would delete before.
Next I would write : The careless Coroner's 'sloppy' autopsy... He was bribed after all so he was probably not sloppy as well as.
I enjoyed the read. All the best, Ulla

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Brett. Great little spooky yarn mate. Please remind me to ask you not to cater for my next barbecue LOL. This is another really entertaining and very vivid image story. That's a freaky picture as well, even my 7yo daughter jumped when I opened it. I wonder how often revenge is taken on judges, scary thought. I had a good time with this tasty yarn Sir....

One tiny spag....

"Oh, I had previously had my run-in(s) with Judge Johnson." (Needs to be plural with the following bit.)

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. Always appreciate them very much indeed. Glad you enjoyed this one. Would eating human flesh be along the same lines as eating a roo? Trying to visualize what I think it might taste like, and somehow, no one has been able to suggest a comparison. Sounded like a great way to get revenge though.

reply by Walu Feral on 07-Aug-2015

LOL. I think I'd prefer roo. I reckon that it would taste like domestic cat, although when you skin a cat the flesh is a kind of green color and slimy, but I've always thought it would taste like cat.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Nice, but weird, story line from start to finish.
Progression was spot on.
No problems noted.
Interresting and thought provoking at the same time.
The evil deed well stated

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Doctor Howler appreciated your comments as well.

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Brett I must admit I liked this one and had a smile as I was reading this and knew the end before I got to it lol well done you have a (wicked mind ha ha) I could just see the sick bags being requested What revenge A good read Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. I will let Doctor Howler know you enjoyed this as well.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Exceptional

this is a great story, brett. it reminds me of a story in my portfolio about eating a steak dinner and milk and finding out it was Elsie, the Borden Cow. I did an obituary for her and a story as well.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. I will let Doctor Howler know you enjoyed his story.