Comment from bard owl

Excellent

Your limerick is quite timely. And Bruce is getting lots and lots of the attention he so craves. Your limerick has a consistent syllable count 8-8-5-5-8. Traditional limericks have a syllable count of 9-9-6-6-9. Anyway, best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015

Thank you bard owl for reading and giving me a great review for this tongue in cheek Limerick.couldn't resist the subject matter ( actually think the whole family are a bit of a joke and cannot take any of them seriously lol) I am learning the rules quite fast and I think this meets the Limerick brief by some resources so went with the 8-8-5-5-8 count this time . Thanks again with Cheers

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements splendidly with correct form. It is an enjoyable read, but the whole Jenner thing seems to be getting a little stale - but this is well executed. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015

Thanks Mystic Angel for reading this and giving me a review it is much appreciated and thanks for your best wishes in the voting. I expect people are a bit over the Jenner thing, but I just couldn't resist a little satire at his/her expense, a bit tongue in cheek and a hmmmmm. So thanks a gain and Cheers

Comment from mvbrooks

Good

clever poem.

The rhyme scheme is AABBA. In your poem, "Caitlyn" and "Him" do not rhyme.

The line count is accurate--the rhyme scheme is not.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015

Thank you mvbrooks for reading and reviewing my Limerick. Appreciate you comments Cheers

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015

Thank you mvbrooks for reading and reviewing my Limerick. Appreciate you comments Cheers

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very well done. I like the humor and satire here. This is timely and presented in an attractive manner. You've done a good job with this Limerick contest entry.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015

Thank you RYME4U for your time and review. A bit tongue in cheek fun and hoped it would be seen as a bit of fun . With Thanks again and .Cheers

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015

Thank you RYME4U for your time and review. A bit tongue in cheek fun and hoped it would be seen as a bit of fun . With Thanks again and .Cheers

Comment from mkflood

Excellent

ROFLMAO! WHAT a cool play of words and rolled at the end of it..thanks for selecting my work and did work well together. Thanks for the laugh and the honor to have my work included with urs..thanks again and great job...mkflood

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015

Thank you mkflood for your review and for your fabulous image which as soon as I saw it knew I had to use it for my Limerick and felt it complimented it beautifully so love your work. I had a bit of fun with this one and hope it is viewed as that. Glad you had a laugh. I think we make a good pair with this one . Thanks again and Cheers

Comment from Mark Valentine

Excellent

Perfect topic for a limerick. The meter works well (though I imagine some nit-pickers out there will insist that the emphasis has to be on the first syllable in Caitlyn - I think it's fine as is), and, most importantly, it's funny. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015

Thank you Mark for your review and comments. Glad you found it funny and hopefully it will meet requirements. Appreciate your support Cheers

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015

Thank you Mark for your review and comments. Glad you found it funny and hopefully it will meet requirements. Appreciate your support Cheers

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Isn't that the truth in a very big, or should I say little, way. What would possess somebody like him to become a her? Unbelievable. Well written poem that should also be a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015

Thank you Brett for your review I suppose it takes all kinds but does lend him/herself to a bit of satire With thanks for reading this Cheers

Comment from Amy Greta

Excellent

Oh my goodness, your limerick is awesome! It's funny without making fun in a malicious way. Your rhyming is so clever and unique (great him / Caitlyn), and then the end had a "BAM" with the mention of the reduction component. Excellent!
Amy

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015

Thank you Amy for having a read and giving this a great review and rating much appreciated. It was really a bit of fun to write and the words just appeared lol .With thanks and Cheers

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

haha. lol. this is a lighthearted, fun and entertaining piece of poetic art dear anonymous! i think the limerick must be fine becuase i don't get what an iambic meter means..
thank you for sharing a laugh!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015

Thank you rebekka for you great review and comments and good luck wishes for the contest I have had fun with this one( personally I don't know what iambic meter is either I write as I think and if if sounds Ok then that is what it is. I will try to learn the rules ASAP lol so thanks and Cheers

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

LOL. After the second line the humor really starts to kick in. A good limerick can never be looked at being biased. Good writing is hard to criticize for its opinions. It's the writing that matters. Great job! Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2015

---

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015

Thanks Les for having a read and a LOL for this little Limerick my first official one anyway. Couldn't help myself with the topical theme and hope it is read as a bit of fun with thanks and Cheers