Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Missy, this is truly lovely. Your poem about love says it all. Not only well written but so clever words chosen to paint your sentiment. Well done. I liked it a lot. Best regards. Ulla

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015

Thanks sug for this encouraging review. Sometimes I am not sure if I am learning anything like meter and such but I can from time to time rhyme. :)

Always,
Missy
The artwork drove the words :)

reply by Ulla on 22-Jul-2015

Missy, my problem is that I don't know the first thing about meter an so, but I know when I read something well written. Ulla xx

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015

:)...me either..when I get reviews telling me about meter I am like ...duh..ok then...lol

reply by Ulla on 22-Jul-2015

I can imagine, but I think you have a natural talent for poetry. And I know you want to learn. Like me writing prose and ind my second language. Sometimes it is hard. Ulla

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015

oh really...English is not your first language...fooled me :) Poetry is not what I came here for ...Short stories..was my main idea. I am learning now in both...I am gonna look again at some of your older stuff..later..got to mow the grass now...lol..grrr life :)

reply by Ulla on 22-Jul-2015

I have a new one on the site right now. Enjoy your lawn mowing, lol. Ulla

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

I have been away for a few days due to personal stuff going on, but am glad to be back and to read such wonderful writing. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015

Was wondering where you had run off too :) thanks sug for the review.

Always,
Missy

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Poetry, words from deep inside someone's heart. The sharing of thoughts and feelings so personal and private, with the willingness to give, asking nothing in return. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015

There is a poet in you Ric :). Thank you for this priceless "from the heart" review. I am humbled.

Always,
Missy

Comment from Ekim777

Excellent

A beautiful poem! A fine metaphor; a lovely lady; a lovely, colorful day.. The glow of her flesh, to be compared to the canvas of mother nature. Perhaps the poet's zeal to overwhelm us with glowing images, sometimes rocks the cadence of some lines. No matter. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015

Thank you EK for this review of my work. I appreciate every single one :)

Always justafan,
Missy

Comment from JanPerry

Excellent

I like the short, then longer lines here.
Sounds like a painting in the making.
Nice analogy between colours and your feelings of love.
I hope you are not forgotten.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015

Thank you, so much for using your valuable time to stop ... read and leave this fine review of my humble offerning. :)

Always justafan,
Missy

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

I have to say that you have the heart of a poet in the lyrical way you approach each subject. This clever use of colour and those of autumn in particular, give your poem a palette from which you can explore the notion of love: red for passion, White the color of grace, pink as the softness of my heart. A nice natural flow to the lines and an original structure. Great work.
SPAG: Brown's and yellow's are plurals so you don't need the apostrophes.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015

I truly was going to send a search party looking for you.
Thank you for coming back :)
Thanks also for reading and reviewing this for me... I will correct that boo boo right now!

Always,
Missy
Does "original structure " mean that all this is... Is rhyme?

reply by mfowler on 21-Jul-2015

No, I meant you've used differing length stanzas (1,2 etc lines), two parts (split by asterisks), and kept it as a rhyming poem. Works effectively in this instance.

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015

Thank you for clarifying Mark

Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson

Exceptional

Unforgettable. I love the title. I love all the vivid colours you paint on your canvas of your poem. You have included the red and pink for love, the colours browns and leaves for autumn, blues and greens cover nature, and the sunrises and sunsets. You then wove a fine covering of graceful white around it. You my dear friend can never ever be forgotten.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015

Aww your review made me cry sug :)
Thank you hon!!!

Always,
Missy

reply by The Mom/DarleneThomson on 21-Jul-2015

Why? I thought it was apt. You painted the lovely picture.

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Hey there sweetie pie
This is awesome and reminds me of something I just posted with you in mind. Our minds seem to run in like circles and the circles are round and to no end...
Bear

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015

Hi... Thank you sug... I just read your gorgeous work of art... Stunning.
Always,
Missy

reply by G.B. Smith on 21-Jul-2015

You make being a friend so much more than nice
Bear

reply by G.B. Smith on 21-Jul-2015

My personal email is: glenbearsmith@gmail.com
Just in case you might like to chat sometime

Comment from Jay Squires

Exceptional

This is a sweet and tender poem, Missy, pure and simple in its delivery.

There's no forced rhymes to contend with (I hate forced rhymes) and your tempo was smooth.

Good job.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015

Hi there Jay... Thank you for you kind words and the added plus of the bling :)
You know how I value your opinion.
Always,
Missy

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Love this!!! :) The artwork sets the mood after I read the title. Great job using colors to describe the different sides of your character. I can feel the expressions.
Shana :)

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015

Shana hon tytyty for this lovely review.

Always,
Missy
The bling is nice tooooooo