Fight Poverty
2-4-2 Poem9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This two - four - two, Fight Poverty, is simple and to the point about the world we live in and the huge chasm between what we take for granted and the reality of the rest of the world's children. Powerful.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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This two - four - two, Fight Poverty, is simple and to the point about the world we live in and the huge chasm between what we take for granted and the reality of the rest of the world's children. Powerful.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Bill my friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Too many times in too many parts of this world these words are so true. This well written 2-4-2 depicts this all too familiar scene well and should be a good contest entry too. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Too many times in too many parts of this world these words are so true. This well written 2-4-2 depicts this all too familiar scene well and should be a good contest entry too. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Hi Brett, thank you very much for the visit and the wonderful review.
Comment from hannahorion
What a powerful poem. This demonstrates what can be achieved in just five words. The diet which is faced on a daily basis hunger! Hunger is the reason we eat in the first place but here hunger is dished up as a remedy for hunger. It all just breeds more hunger. I was blown away by this poem.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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What a powerful poem. This demonstrates what can be achieved in just five words. The diet which is faced on a daily basis hunger! Hunger is the reason we eat in the first place but here hunger is dished up as a remedy for hunger. It all just breeds more hunger. I was blown away by this poem.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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hannahorion, I appreciate your time and am glad that you like the write, thank you very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Cybertron1986
A very touching and real subject matter. Your word's are precise in describing the one's who have to suffer the most with no real choice. Your picture is appropriate and supplements the emotions described here. An emotional read.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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A very touching and real subject matter. Your word's are precise in describing the one's who have to suffer the most with no real choice. Your picture is appropriate and supplements the emotions described here. An emotional read.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Hello Cyberton1986, I appreciate your time and am glad that you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice job with the syllable count. I enjoyed reading 'Fight'. I think it is a very important message to pass on. Good job!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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Nice job with the syllable count. I enjoyed reading 'Fight'. I think it is a very important message to pass on. Good job!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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My friend, I thank you for stopping by and blessing with encouragement.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem. It flows well and your artwork choice goes well with it. Your poem is cleverly written.
Angel123
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It flows well and your artwork choice goes well with it. Your poem is cleverly written.
Angel123
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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angel123, I am pleased you enjoyed the write; appreciate your time, thank you very much.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements perfectly with a spot on line and syllable count. You deliver a powerful social admonishment in a few well chosen words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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This meets the contest requirements perfectly with a spot on line and syllable count. You deliver a powerful social admonishment in a few well chosen words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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I appreciate your insights and thank you very much for the wonderful review.
Comment from ellie6
Poignant and sad, but unfortunately all too true. The picture expresses a lot.
good interpretation of the theme, I believe the rule is -the less punctuation, the better these short poems are received.( I think thats right)
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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Poignant and sad, but unfortunately all too true. The picture expresses a lot.
good interpretation of the theme, I believe the rule is -the less punctuation, the better these short poems are received.( I think thats right)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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ellie6, I appreciate your visit and the insights, thank you very much.
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello poet
powerful message
words tell the story
format is in true form
excellent presentation
well done
thank you for sharing
best of luck with the contest
ann marie
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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hello poet
powerful message
words tell the story
format is in true form
excellent presentation
well done
thank you for sharing
best of luck with the contest
ann marie
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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Hello ann marie, I appreciate your visit and am pleased to read your wonderful review, thank you very much.