Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Hah! I don't think that there is a country large enough to fit that morons ego. Maybe if he left his hair behind. Wait, I know- just take him to a pond- it worked for Narcissus.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

He is wearing on me. Always spouts out the answers before he even know what the questions are.

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is well written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and it held my attention. It is clever and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts.

Angel123

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

Thank you for reviewing.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements perfectly with a spot on line and syllable count. Nice use of art to express a political opinion. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

Thank you for reviewing.

Comment from Clover77

Excellent

Well written 2-4-2 writing prompt. The image goes well with this short poem. I wish you luck in the contest and with future writing. Well done.
~Julia

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

Thank you for the great review. the picture is of my mom and dad.

Comment from JBCaine

Excellent

Author X-
While your point is well made, I can't even imagine a world where the guy even makes it to the primaries, but as weird as things are right now, this just may be that oddly twisted world.
Good luck to you in your contest. I would suggest you change "Your" to "You're" in your description line.... This is, after all, a writing site.
Even with the grammar gaff, this made me laugh.
Nicely done.
JBCaine-

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015

Thanks for catching the spag.