Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Poet lovely statements should be cherished this works grabbing items of rightful vision with gleaming expectations at least I feel

suggestion

What a beautiful sight,
this spectrum of light

A multicolour arc
vivid and bright

Seven wonderful hues
of red yellow and blues

A gift with love
from above given to us

Through drops of
terrain rain to brighten

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

Thanks for your review and suggestions. mary

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This rainbow poem, Seven Wonderful Hues, is really making the most out of this phenomenon of refracted light rays. We all seek the divine in the sublime. Nice work.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

Thanks Bill

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

This flows with a happy and upbeat story of the rainbow and its meaning. I loved the way you made this into almost a song!

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

thanks Loanna, nice to see yo back. Mary

reply by LoannaLois on 12-Jun-2015

Oh Mary...it has been a long winter in my life...Just seeing your name cheers me.

reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

I hope you are in the Spring again x

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely. You deliver a lovely piece of ode like verse as you extol the wonders of the rainbow. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

Thanks Monica

Comment from jules4jesus

Exceptional

woo that's awesome im sorry you are missing the people who left but i will be more than happy to review your poems they are great a absolutely love rainbows they are so precious and yes they remind us of the covenant promised to Noah

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

Thanks for your six stars much appreciated. Mary

reply by jules4jesus on 12-Jun-2015

thats ok it was a great read

Comment from danpald

Excellent

Such beauty comes to be held with care
When seen twice then prayer is said
For the sign of new life is given with love
From the creator of all the world above

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015

Thanks danpaid

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

I love your rainbow poem. It brings the message loud and clear of the purpose of God's rainbow for us. Well done and I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015

Thanks for your excellent review.

Comment from justafan

Excellent

Stunning in both the artwork and in the beautiful verse. I read them all and this is my favorite. It is simply marvelous and a winner in my book. Good luck in the contest.

Always justafan,
Missy

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

I am so pleased you liked my poem, thanks for your review and great comments.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good job with the prompt. Your rhyming couplets tell a great story of the rainbow, I enjoyed it very much. The artwork is perfect, too.

I would change one word in this line:
Sometimes two is in sight [are in sight].

Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

Thanks for your excellent review, and the helpful suggestion, which is fixed. much appreciated.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is well written and expressed well. I like how you have added a spiritual touch. The rhymes run smoothly and the presentation is very attractive.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

I really appreciate your excellent review and comments.