Crucified Dead And Buried
An anthem for Easter4 total reviews
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a dramatic and very well-written acrostic. I like the way it builds in a crescendo to the final line: "Deo gracias! Risen Lord!" It has a pleasant flow and a nice touch of rhyme. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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This is a dramatic and very well-written acrostic. I like the way it builds in a crescendo to the final line: "Deo gracias! Risen Lord!" It has a pleasant flow and a nice touch of rhyme. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thank you very much for this kind and well thought out review. You have caught on to exactly what I was trying to do and it is nice to be appreciated.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
An excellent job with the prompt and explaining the message of Easter. I really enjoyed your acrostic. Everything you wrote seems to have been carefully chosen with no 'filler' words. Good job. No changes needed. Good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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An excellent job with the prompt and explaining the message of Easter. I really enjoyed your acrostic. Everything you wrote seems to have been carefully chosen with no 'filler' words. Good job. No changes needed. Good luck.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this and many thanks for the review and stars awarded. Have a great Easter yourself.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This story never ceases to bring me out in goosebumps. I have read it countless times in my lifetime, yet it still touches my heart when I read it. You have used the Acrostic words well. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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This story never ceases to bring me out in goosebumps. I have read it countless times in my lifetime, yet it still touches my heart when I read it. You have used the Acrostic words well. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Yes, I agree. It is one of those tales that never ceases to shock however many times and whatever form it is retold. Thanks for the review and stars and enjoy your Easter break if you are able to take one.
Comment from stephybs
This is a nice Acrostic and very well written, it is also very nice to see how we to revive our thoughts this time of year. There is no need for art work with this piece it holds up all on its own. Thanks for sharing. Stephanie
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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This is a nice Acrostic and very well written, it is also very nice to see how we to revive our thoughts this time of year. There is no need for art work with this piece it holds up all on its own. Thanks for sharing. Stephanie
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your kind review. I thought this was the right time to bring this out - breaking news one might say.