Diamond-(2-10-2)
gift of love4 total reviews
Comment from K. Lorraine
Very pretty and a lovely entry for a Valentine Day time of the year poem. I enjoyed reading the poetic verse very much. The diamond broach is gorgeous. Any woman would love to find it in a bouquet of red roses. Thank you for sharing your talents. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
Very pretty and a lovely entry for a Valentine Day time of the year poem. I enjoyed reading the poetic verse very much. The diamond broach is gorgeous. Any woman would love to find it in a bouquet of red roses. Thank you for sharing your talents. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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Thank you
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. This is lovely in imagery, but I wish you had not used diamond twice as it would have completed the piece a bit more strongly. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. This is lovely in imagery, but I wish you had not used diamond twice as it would have completed the piece a bit more strongly. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thank you
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thank you
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a great little 2-10-2 poem. Accompanying art work is well chosen. Well presented and well written.
Good luck in the contest.
GMG
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
Hi there,
This is a great little 2-10-2 poem. Accompanying art work is well chosen. Well presented and well written.
Good luck in the contest.
GMG
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thank you