Bullying
2-10-2 contest11 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
You captured the utter despair of someone being bullied relentlessly. I have not tried this tiny form, but you managed it well and added a powerful artwork to intensify your message. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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You captured the utter despair of someone being bullied relentlessly. I have not tried this tiny form, but you managed it well and added a powerful artwork to intensify your message. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Thanks Joan for your review. Mary
Comment from Dr. Nad
" bullying" is a nice 2-10-2 writing prompt entry. you have spoken to our social conscience, and left us with an admonition. Bullying is a practice that we cannot allow. We must stand up and speak out. best of luck in the contest. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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" bullying" is a nice 2-10-2 writing prompt entry. you have spoken to our social conscience, and left us with an admonition. Bullying is a practice that we cannot allow. We must stand up and speak out. best of luck in the contest. May God bless you!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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Thanks for your review and best wishes
You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from daeneam
Please don't do that. Just think about other people who suffer more bullying. Besides, God will never give you something you can't surpass.
The comment I made is a reaction to the small voice with your little poem. Strong! c", mae
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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Please don't do that. Just think about other people who suffer more bullying. Besides, God will never give you something you can't surpass.
The comment I made is a reaction to the small voice with your little poem. Strong! c", mae
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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Thanks for your review and best wishes
Comment from adewpearl
compelling pairing of photo and poem, which is in good 2/10/2 syllable count for the contest
intense expression of despairing emotion - a strong emotional appeal
Brooke
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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compelling pairing of photo and poem, which is in good 2/10/2 syllable count for the contest
intense expression of despairing emotion - a strong emotional appeal
Brooke
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks Brooke for the excellent review.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. You deliver a timely and thought provoking message. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. You deliver a timely and thought provoking message. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the excellent review.
Comment from James Partlow
Woh. Had experience with this? It's interesting to see how many of the 2-10-2 poems are about death. LOL
Thank you for posting.
- Jim
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Woh. Had experience with this? It's interesting to see how many of the 2-10-2 poems are about death. LOL
Thank you for posting.
- Jim
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Terrible experience to have, some worse than others. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Dawny53
Good work.. the writer paints an honest picture here on what many teens go through.. I had to pull my son out of high school.. and joined the ranks of the home schoolers because of bullying.. it is real, it does take lives. Good for you for writing it.. hope you win!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Good work.. the writer paints an honest picture here on what many teens go through.. I had to pull my son out of high school.. and joined the ranks of the home schoolers because of bullying.. it is real, it does take lives. Good for you for writing it.. hope you win!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the encouraging review, and the best wishes for the contest.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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Thanks Fez for the great review
Comment from Daphne Molson
The syllable counts required in the first line of 2 is 2 in the words, just and stop. There are 10 syllables in the second line, and 2 again in the third line, so it is proper enough as to its syllable count, but it is a begging, poignant short statement, of a suicidal abused woman asking someone please help her save her life of being bullied or then death have her. I, Daphne Molson, of Peterborough, Ontario, Canada would answer her, Help you, Did anyone come or did you choose death, Bye then. Wish you, That you did wish someone save you from death, Live please. A Mom, Daphne Molson
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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The syllable counts required in the first line of 2 is 2 in the words, just and stop. There are 10 syllables in the second line, and 2 again in the third line, so it is proper enough as to its syllable count, but it is a begging, poignant short statement, of a suicidal abused woman asking someone please help her save her life of being bullied or then death have her. I, Daphne Molson, of Peterborough, Ontario, Canada would answer her, Help you, Did anyone come or did you choose death, Bye then. Wish you, That you did wish someone save you from death, Live please. A Mom, Daphne Molson
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi Daphne, The 2-10-2 poems have to be straight to the point. Unfortunately this is happening far too often. Where my sister lives her son's two friends took their own lives. It needs to be highlighted and stopped.
Thanks for the time you have taken to review it.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A very powerful poem in not many words.
Very well crafted and executed.
Fantastic accompanying art work.
Good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi there,
A very powerful poem in not many words.
Very well crafted and executed.
Fantastic accompanying art work.
Good luck in the contest
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the good luck wishes and great review, I appreciate it.