Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is beautiful in words and presentation. God indeed is alive and I am blessed to call Him my Father. Good luck in the contest Patricia

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks patcelaw,
I am delighted you enjoyed Moonrise. :-) Carolyn

Comment from scd41

Excellent

Moon is known to have mysterious link with romance and your Acrostic poem on Moonrise nicely touches this point when lovers experience its enhanced charm. It has a spiritual significance as well and the line 'Sensual yet spiritual making hearts warm' puts it aptly.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Hi there,
your review is so through and encouraging. I appreciate that you enjoyed Moonrise.... :-) Carolyn

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

this is a beautiful six star poem you have penned. everything you said in it is very true. it was a joy to read and review. love the artwork. hugs, teri

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thank you so much Teri,
The shining sixer is amazing and the words you wrote are even better. So glad you liked Moonrise... :-) Carolyn

reply by Teri7 on 10-Mar-2015

I enjoyed your work. hugs, teri

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Evocative poem is like a prayer of thanks for being alive. I love how she captures the mood of a moonrise and wonderment at it. This is a deeply spiritual poem.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015

Thanks Sis Cat for this wonderful review and generous rating.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Carolyn, I love the wording in this one....beautiful...moonrise awakens the night...romancing the Earth with delight...once again ...your colors and your picture are beautiful...very well written you...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks dear Linda for your wonderful comments and awesome stars. I so love the moonlight.
Love you, Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 07-Jan-2015

so do I...you are always so welcome you...xxoo

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Very nice, Carolyn. I like the way you refer to the moon's romantic charm and how lovers cleave to it. The picture is perfect for this poem. It looks like it is in Arizona. Nice acrostic and good luck in the contest. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks Miss Sally,
Yes the picture is from AZ. So glad you liked the poem. I enjoyed writing it as well.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

You captured my attention from the start.
I like the artwork you choose for your poem, it is perfect for your poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks misscookie,
so glad you liked this one.
Love, Carolyn

reply by misscookie on 09-Jan-2015

Take care. Have a blessed weekend.
Cookie

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your letters work well in your Acrostic Moonrise
each line flows and allows the reader to see and feel the opulence of the moon and its effect

good imagery

flows easy read

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

You always make me feel there is hope.. I always appreciate your fine editing and comments. FS only lets me nominate you one time a month. LOL...
Thanks again SC
:-) Carolyn

reply by Smoothiecool on 07-Jan-2015

Oh thanks for the thought vote accepted LOL
I prefer the critique than whimsy remarks
have a blessed day .....SC <:> Faye (*:*)

Comment from suep

Excellent

Excellent acrostic with great flow and beautiful presentation. I especially love 'Nocturnal balance of Creators' might / Romancing the earth with lunar delight' and also your final line ... Such beauty is certainly evidence of a living and loving God. Well done. Best wishes in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015

Thanks for your comments and best wished suep. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

This flows nicely and creates a spiritual message. I like the use of enjambment. Best line:Romancing the earth with lunar delight. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015

Thanks Shari for this wonderful review. So glad you liked the poem. :-) Carolyn