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Viewing comments for Chapter 100 "Winter scenes"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from GracieAnn
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Carolyn, this write utilizes word imagery that is quite lovely. Solid use of the b b rhyming scheme and resounds with honor toward our Lord and Creator. Inspiring. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
    Thank you my dear friend, Happy 2015.. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
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Hi, Carolyn. Yes you got that right. God is the Master Painter. I love the scenes of winter. It has been snowing and then raining and the trees are beautiful, though the roads are not so nice. Good job. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
    We had a nasty weather day today as well, but a wonderful Sunday as we were able to get to worship as usual. Thank you for your great comments.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from Irish Rain
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So true, and He used all the crayons in the box! Wonderful poem, tribute to God and His beautiful gallery of works! I like the last line...'our blest winter scenes'.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
    Thanks Irish Rain,
    I love your 'all the crayons in the box.' I used no picture just so everyone could imagine their own favorite scenes.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
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IT MUST BE BEAUTIFUL TO WITNESS WINTER IN ITS TRUE FORM. TODAY WE ARE AT 69 DEGREES. IT IS MUGGY AND SEVERE THUNDERSTORMS ARE ON THE HORIZEN.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
    Yes, winter has its blessings. Thank you so much for this wonderful review.
    Love, Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
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HI Carolyn...you sound like me...seeing all the beauty of Winter...and it truly can be amazing...love the way you describe the Winter...gives a person the chills...love it...so very nicely written...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
    Hi there dear Linda,
    Thanks for your wonderful comments. I love living in a region where we have all four seasons. The more tropical or desert climates are good to visit, but give me a little snow now and then.
    Love you, Carolyn
reply by l.raven on 03-Jan-2015
    we are expecting snow tonight...and they say more on Wednesday...yes!!! me too...luff xxoo you are always soooooo very welcome...love reading your poems...luff xxoo
Comment from rjpurdy
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Nicely done! Your quatrains flow nicely with good progression. You tell a fine story of winter. Your meter is immpecable and the rhyming is natural and unforced. This time of year it is difficult to find wonder, when most are ready for spring. Excellent write. Rod

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
    Thanks Rod,
    I am always ready for Spring. LOL...However, all seasons hold their own beauty and grace. Thank you so much for your awesome review and the observations regarding meter and rhyme. I feel very encouraged by your words.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from miajaffri
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This is an inspiring poem of God's handiwork. I like ... pictorial treasures
beyond all measure and carved by nothingness by God's own hand. Our
mountains are snow capped now. They are beautiful as I look out my
front window. Isn't it sad that so many don't even look up to notice.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
    Hi there,
    Thank you so much for your fine comments and review. I truly believe that 'looking up' is the key.
    :-) Carolyn
Comment from emrpoems
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my daughter loves living in Canada simply for its beauty. Snow-capped mountains, sparkling lakes etc
You have crated vivid imagery with you descriptive phrases
Great use of enjambment
Good rhythm and rhyme
I always ponder the beauty of nature. the combination of colors the texture of leaves etc

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
    Thank you for this fantastic review, rating and interesting comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from zanya
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Winter's intrinsic and stunning scenes are a visual delight to comfort us through the darkest of icy cold days 'Sparkling lakes/Frozen in time'and of course the piece de reisistance #White clad cedars'.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
    Thanks zanya for this fine review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from misscookie
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You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Your words are so true.
It's sad when people are rushing here and there and miss the beauty He has created.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
    What a sweet review misscookie, thank you so much. :-) Carolyn
reply by misscookie on 04-Jan-2015
    You're very welcome, Peace God be with you.
    Cookie