The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 104 "The Soul"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
6 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
The soul, indeed the soul goes beyond, that's a very nice expressed poem, good luck at the contest, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Hugs! lakeport,
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
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The soul, indeed the soul goes beyond, that's a very nice expressed poem, good luck at the contest, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Hugs! lakeport,
Comment Written 30-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much, once again for this review. Happy New Year E, :-) Carolyn
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you are very welcome, Hugs! Lakeport,
Happy New Year 2015!!
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nicely written from your point of view. Mine is different to some extent so I won't comment on content. These are the best lines for me:
"It comes within a body born
A physical casing shrouds
its form
It was given us by the living God
Long before on earth
we trod"
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Very nicely written from your point of view. Mine is different to some extent so I won't comment on content. These are the best lines for me:
"It comes within a body born
A physical casing shrouds
its form
It was given us by the living God
Long before on earth
we trod"
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you for a wonderfully candid review and awesome stars. I appreciate all you have said. :-) Carolyn
Comment from TAB_that's me
What a wonderful spiritual poem for the soul writing prompt. Your last two stanzas sum it up well what you think is the soul. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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What a wonderful spiritual poem for the soul writing prompt. Your last two stanzas sum it up well what you think is the soul. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you Teresa for this fine review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from K. Lorraine
This was one of the most beautiful poems that I've ever read. I believe that I have a happy soul, however sometimes sad times fall upon it... which I think is in the Lords plan to bring us back to HIM. I'm so in awe with this beautifully written 'scripture' type poetic verse, that I need time to digest it before I could say anything more. Thank you for sharing an intimate part of your very own soul and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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This was one of the most beautiful poems that I've ever read. I believe that I have a happy soul, however sometimes sad times fall upon it... which I think is in the Lords plan to bring us back to HIM. I'm so in awe with this beautifully written 'scripture' type poetic verse, that I need time to digest it before I could say anything more. Thank you for sharing an intimate part of your very own soul and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you so very much K. Lorraine for your awesome comments. Have a wonderful day. I am delighted you liked 'The Soul'. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Nosha17
The 'essence of our being' is definitely that certain something that makes us tick. We determine the nature of our souls by our choices. The rewards will be many if the choices are good. Well expressed thoughts and good use of rhyming and imagery to convey your thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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The 'essence of our being' is definitely that certain something that makes us tick. We determine the nature of our souls by our choices. The rewards will be many if the choices are good. Well expressed thoughts and good use of rhyming and imagery to convey your thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you Faye,I am so happy you enjoyed The Soul and appreciate your fine comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Walu Feral
A Good prompt entry I feel. Well done and well set out. It is always a topic which leaves me baffled on how to describe it, you did it well. Good luck
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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A Good prompt entry I feel. Well done and well set out. It is always a topic which leaves me baffled on how to describe it, you did it well. Good luck
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you so very much, I appreciate all you have said, as well as all those stars. It is a difficult subject.