Post Pongid Progress
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Comment from nordicgirl
A difficult read that takes some study to understand. The meaning is there and so is the sense. A geat out loud read. The attempt at depth was successful.
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A difficult read that takes some study to understand. The meaning is there and so is the sense. A geat out loud read. The attempt at depth was successful.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
Comment from Cajungirl
Penned it perfectly. Sorry, just got stuck on the Ps. LOL
I enjoyed the read. You've done a fantastic job with the use of only one letter, P. Best of luck in the contest.
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Penned it perfectly. Sorry, just got stuck on the Ps. LOL
I enjoyed the read. You've done a fantastic job with the use of only one letter, P. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is not a favorite style of poetry but you did follow the rules. I disagree about pointlessly psychotic psyche - they start with the right letters but do not have the 'p' sound.
teresa
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This is not a favorite style of poetry but you did follow the rules. I disagree about pointlessly psychotic psyche - they start with the right letters but do not have the 'p' sound.
teresa
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from Neonewman
Strong and direct piece you have masterly crafted for this alliteration celebration writing prompt. Powerful meaning behind your words and definitely a contender in this contest. Good luck and God Bless!
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Strong and direct piece you have masterly crafted for this alliteration celebration writing prompt. Powerful meaning behind your words and definitely a contender in this contest. Good luck and God Bless!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets and exceeds the contest requirements. You get points for just knowing about Pangea LOL since most folks do not go further back than Atlantis. This is very well delivered and pretty potent from beginning to end. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This meets and exceeds the contest requirements. You get points for just knowing about Pangea LOL since most folks do not go further back than Atlantis. This is very well delivered and pretty potent from beginning to end. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from onebrit
Love the picture, and the colors you chose are great, this piece just pops on all fronts. The wording is wonderful....reading it out loud it just flows so well. Plus, great message.
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Love the picture, and the colors you chose are great, this piece just pops on all fronts. The wording is wonderful....reading it out loud it just flows so well. Plus, great message.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, great use of alliteration in this poetic exercise, I didn't understand a couple of the meanings. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, great use of alliteration in this poetic exercise, I didn't understand a couple of the meanings. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014